HiHi~ PearL here, hope you had fun reading this!
I am completely new to creating, but have been a reader for a loooong while.
So I decided to create my own series.
It's going to be a long ride.
So check out for much early releases, https://www.patreon.com/pearl1
(everything might be off by 1 page)
ch 1- 1-13
ch 2- 14-27
ch 3- 28-39
ch 4- 40-54
ch 5- 55-71
ch 6- 71-85
ch 7- 86-
ch 8- 97-112
ch 9- 113- 127
ch 10- 127-
ch 11- 139- 157
ch 12- 158-
ch 13- 167

thanks for reading!!

LINK for pdf (ch 1-10)
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1suNPUzPGVyT2L4eUHBHDx3oFJ7NTtTcw?usp=sharing

Why would you even upload the same thing twice within six hours of each other, rather than 1) just updating the gallery that already exists or 2) Just uploading the whole thing right away?
I genuinely do not understand.

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Beyond the comment above, it is also a good idea to only post tags when you actually have them in your story instead of putting tags for future content. Good luck with your story btw, I hope you complete it

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@Blublab123

I'd like to think my comment on their previous gallery at least shamed them a little, and they made a good faith effort to fix things but didn't know they could update the same gallery. The whole thing seems like they really don't know what they're doing.

But it's still a presumptively tagged, deliberately incomplete teaser for a Patreon page with absurd membership levels and virtually no content. Seriously, PearL, you need to do more before you start asking for money. This is like a child demanding the whole cookie jar for a single crayon drawing.

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I agree with the readers, you can't post your teaser and ask people to fund you at once. I think it's best to share a full chapter that will encourage people to read the rest of the story, that's the least you can do.

Now I feel like you just came to ask people for money. You should improve a lot of things in your stories because it's not that good...

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yeah i am really sorry, i just didnt know galleries could be updated because when i published it, it said something like "no changes can be made". and yea i just hope that with time chapters just pile up

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I don't know what I was expecting, but it certainly wasn't TF2. This has got to be a meme.

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That's it, I'm out. Dozens pages to do what could have been done in a few. I was intrigued by the premise, which is why I kept checking in, but this is just the same old, low-effort "content" that we typically get from Western CG "artists". It's not worth my attention, and it's certainly not worth patronizing.

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sorry for your bad experience. I agree that a lot of stuff could have been done in a few pages and i could've just skimmed over the story but i personally wanted to write create a somewhat 'actual' story, where in the mc slowly changes. with each change in the mc's body changing his personality and perception while there is also actual progression. if i do someday start with a new story, i will make sure to make it much more fast paced.

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finish this one first ok.

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@CreatorPearL1

I get what your going for and like the story so far, its just slow paced. What you CAN do is put a disclaimer page at the start/or under your first post saying this is a slow start story. This makes it so that people don't go into it with high expectations and understand it's gonna take a long time to build up....like multiple marmalade stories. Saying the other guy is a patron story is quite smart honestly, but you should put a disclaimer that THAT story is also slow paced.....OR you could speed up the pace of that story and leave this one slower, you have quite a few options but for now because there isn't MUCH happening here try to make it clear to readers what to expect at the moment till you add more "exciting" content.

I like it so far though.

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thanks a lot @yuas, i'll put up a disclaimer with the next update as soon as possible

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Even with the warning that it's gonna be slow, I really hope this picks up sooner and start being faster, this is way too slow.

Last edited on 18 February 2023, 15:38.

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