https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/100324357
https://nitter.it/DiisukeHan/status/1556565888634982401
https://nijie.info/view.php?id=503056
https://www.melonbooks.co.jp/detail/detail.php?product_id=1590649
https://ec.toranoana.jp/tora_r/ec/item/040031005587/
https://bookmate-net.com/ec/51061
https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ410947.html

ENG: /g/2487414/ac903a45b5/

He needs to get back to making the next kenchinroku.
I think we've had enough Urumi cuckoldry.
She honestly deserves better.

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Imagine me,still hard on the hopium for a sequel to that Byakuren book a while back
I need more of his Shou than just the one page,god damn

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Eng:

Before I was good with RAPE without doing so much ROMANCE, but now I'm really disappointed reading this garbage....

Better I would say to the author, better dedicate yourself as before... MONKFISH, ORGY, ect, but WITHOUT ROMANCE as your first DOUSHINJI were.

In short, I knew that this is already very hard and the story is so pathetic, which felt like ONE BEAT.

Anyway... it's better that he doesn't do any more stories because after all he doesn't have a clue what he's doing anymore.

Spa:

Antes era bueno con los RAPE sin hacer tanto ROMANCE, pero ahora en verdad me decepciono bastante en leer esta basura....

Mejor diria al autor, mejor dedicate como antes.... RAPE, ORGIA, ect, pero SIN ROMANCE como fueron tus primeros DOUSHINJI.

En fin sabia que esto ya es muy esforzado y tan patetica la historia, cual se sintio de UN GOLPE.

En fin... mejor que ya no haga mas historias porque al fin al cabo ya no tiene ni idiea lo que esta haciendo.

日本：

前はそんなにロマンをやらなくてもレイプだけは得意だったのに、今はこんなゴミを読んでガッカリです…。

著者に言いたいのは、以前と同じように自分自身を捧げた方がいいということです... MONKFISH、ORGY、ect、しかしあなたの最初の同人誌のようにロマンスはありません.

要するに、これはすでに非常に難しいことを知っていて、ストーリーがとても哀れで、ONE BEATのように感じました。

とにかく... 彼はもう何をしているのかわからないので、これ以上ストーリーを作成しない方がよいでしょう.

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-comment about bad translation/scans
-this is shit because my opinion/ no explanation
-empty thank you for translation which raw i never read
-empty thank you and begging so you translate it it language you don't bother click
tenboro fell for free speech moron so now comments like those above will be on full display forever like this nonce kirous01
Thank for advance for vote, in future when tenboro remove comment score (ala Youtube) you will only see positives on my comment

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