001
OG: 朱里ちゃん…
TL: Shuri-chan...
ED: her name is Akari

actually I'm gonna start from the end this time

020
OG: 朱里…ちゃん？
TL: Shuri-chan...?
ED: her name is Akari

OG: 今度は私が雫の事いーっぱい可愛がってあげる雫のえっちな磔姿皆に見てもらおうね
TL: "I want to see your lewd cricifixion play, Shizuku"
ED: she's gonna show everyone how lewd Shizuku looks while on the cross

019
OG: きてっ！！そのまま射精してぇ！！
TL: "I'm going to cum inside!"
ED: wrong speaker

018
OG: くくっ そういうわけだ神姫セレスティアはもういないここにいるのは快楽に溺れるただの牝だよ
TL: "Haha! This is how it is, the divine princess Celestia is just a woman who drowns in pleasure!"
ED: missing detail, he says divine princess Celestia is no more

OG: そんな…朱里ちゃん…
TL: "No way..Shuri-chan"
ED: her name is Akari

OG: あ朱里ちゃんお願いっ正気に…
TL: "Ah, Shuri-chan, please come back..."
ED: her name is Akari and she's being told to come back to her senses

016
OG: 喜んでもらえたようで何よりだ
TL: "I'm glad you like it!"
ED: she's saying there's nothing better than giving her pleasure

015
OG: ６０点といったところだがまぁいいだろう
TL: "I give your pussy sixty points"
ED: missing detail, he says it's alright at the end

OG: いきなりきたぁあぁ！！
TL: "You're in me!"
ED: she's talking about how he thrusts without warning

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Why bother ?

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Ok what? Is this MTL or just poor translation?

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@JakeGonzales
This guy is a notorious troll who takes the cnTL and then MTLs it into english.

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