A sequel comic to Rise of the Demon Queen that I commissioned from Astraea-R on DeviantArt. More pages will be added as they're created. Visuals made by Astraea-R with the story written by me.

artist's page: https://www.deviantart.com/astraea-r

Check out the original story here: /g/2344697/20985991e3/

Please feel free to leave comments and let us know what you think of the story, or even offer some suggestions.

Ooh, a sequel, awesome! But... Lilith must be stopped now? Awww, don't do that... I want her to become more bigger and stronger. We were all rooting for her in the first part...
Okay the queen says she's been terrorizing them but she just wants to make sure people wouldn't rise against demons again, which is understandable after what happened to her.

Also, why does Stacy not like reading manga, if she's such a slut she's gonna have a field day with anime/manga porn.

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@giovannileanza Iskra has a reason she wants to 'stop' Lilith and that will be revealed very soon. And Stacy doesn't necessarily hate manga, she just joined the club because she needed some extra curricular activities, and she wanted to do something that was easy.

Last edited on 19 December 2022, 06:25.

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Oh shoot, i didn't realise you're the creator of this comic *didn't read your first comment until now, derp*. So you wrote part 1 as well and i had no idea all that time, that's so cool!
As i mentioned i loved the first part and am excited to see what you have in store for us! ^__^

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@giovannileanza Technically I'm not the creator of the comic, I just commissioned it. While I might write the dialogue and provide the story details, Astraea-R creates the all scenes in Koikatsu. And I'm glad you liked the first part :)

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Oh, a sequel to the demon queen comic? An unexpected surprise, but a welcome one. Can't wait to see what you have planned this time. If it has as much of the content as the first one, I'm sure I'll definitely like this one too.

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@otherscar I just want to temper your expectations now, this sequel won't be nearly as long as the original. It will still be a decent length, but it definitely won't reach 90+ pages like the original.

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A nice start, here's to hoping we get to see more pregnancy in future pages!

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@JTZ429 - Of course, credits to Astraea as well for doing most of the work i assume, you're a winning team in my book!
While i don't like Koikatsu that much i should mail Astraea sometime for Stacy's character card, she looks hot :P

I dunno what it is with Koikatsu, the anime CG looks... alright i guess, but i just can't seem to make a good looking girl in that game.
I prefer Illusion's realistic looking games, i enjoyed Honey Select 2 quite a lot and currently playing their latest game, RoomGirl.

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I know I have no say since I’m enjoying this for free, but I would honestly prefer an ending where Lilith becomes powerful to rule over the universe and becomes a true goddess. Exerting her divine will on reality.
Hentai/porn involving a deity is pretty scarce. Doubly so for “bad end/evil deity” porn.

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@Eric Keldrev If you like that type of story, and you haven't read it already, I suggest you check out my previous commission from Astraea, Lucy's Vore n Growth Spell.

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Ah, so she wants to steal Lilith's power
Well, can't wait to see how she'll divinely fuck this plan up

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R.I.P. Cute maid girl, never forget :(

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There she is, so good to see Lilith again, i actually felt happy when i saw her ＼(＾O＾)／ She's looking better than ever!

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Absolutely, i noticed the little tweaks and it's great, well done :D I also really really like Aisling ♥ Definitely my favorite character, after Lilith of course :3
Edit: Nice, a little story from Rozanne what happened after part 1 (lovely children btw, happy mom there), also nice to see how life is these days, pretty peaceful indeed. That's another thing i love about this part so far ^^

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I'm actually interested as to where this is going.

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I'm quite surprised Lilith mellowed out after getting her revenge. Godhood must've given her an epiphany or something...or more likely she mellowed out due to her target being taken care of(aka the kingdom that stumbled into the fate of making a demon queen). Not much reason to continue revenge when your target is taken care of.

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Nothing really interesting happens, just fucking like rabbits. The first one was waaaay better imo

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Pretty underwhelming story this time, I was hoping the villain had planned for the girls to switch sides but it seems to be a pretty dull conclusion. Hopefully the demon queen at least has a decent meal.

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oh that elf is in so much trouble, i can see her being eaten, use as a cock sock(in her original form), being truninto breeding stock, or the queen could take away her powers and give her to the kids as a sex toy

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I want to see Lilith knocked up, just so we can see her with a nice big belly for reasons other than vore. Really get some mileage out of that pattern on her belly!

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@JTZ429 I just figured Iskra would be a bit more prepared than that. My expectations was that Iskra would have been close by in disguise or something to see the battle fold and make sure it goes to her favor, and if not then would use some sorta of plot device she might have had in one of the girls to trigger something that would weaken Lillith giving her the opportunity to drain her. Then after she has her fun with those powers, the heroes stop her using similar plot device. Then Lillith has her way with everyone.

I could go more into details, but the point is that there could be a way around what you're saying, but it is your story and I respect that. That said, overall it is a rather underwhelming story with not much meat besides Lillith having sex. Would have been nice to actually see her use more powers and all to really drive home the point that she is all powerful and such.

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Geez~! What the hell happened here? Lol.

All I want is isekai harem mind control sex stuff. If I wanted some grand epic I'd read Homer's "The Odyssey" or something.

Edit: Not directed at you @JTZ429. You do you~! :3

Last edited on 09 February 2023, 22:04.

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@magno It's literally a sequel to the story focused entirely on GTS growth, vore, and absorption, and is supposed to show Lilith growing her family and rebuilding the demon race (which she explicitly said she'd do at the end of the first part.) If all you want is vore, growth, and absorption, then go re-read the original story or, better yet, you're more than welcome to commission your own story :)

This is the third story that I've commissioned from Astraea, and the first two centered entirely around vore, absorption, and growth. So, heaven forbid I wanted to do something different the third time. I'll tell you the same thing I told vwolf198, if you don't like it, then please don't read it.

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lol I kind of saw where vwolf was coming from.

I myself sort of have similar disappointments with this since I like “bad ending/corruption” porn (especially ones based around futa) and I don’t think we get enough of that. So I was a little sad when this went the wholesome route for the sequel. I personally would have liked more evilness for the sequel. But it’s not a big deal lmao. Also I’m not putting down money for anything so my complaints don’t really hold any real weight.

Also the whole “story being underwhelming” or whatever doesn’t really make sense. It’s fucking fetish porn. I kind of feel like the story comes second to it being fap material.

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@vwolf198 if you’re looking for well developed and meaningful stories you are on the wrong fucking site dude. This is a torrent site for fetish porn. There’s little-no high art on this website.

Complaint about the fact that the story is underwhelming or that the characters make no sense or anything like that is like complaining there’s no flavor complexity in a Big Mac at McDonald's.

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@JTZ429 I will admit I think the better move here would be to be the bigger man here. I understand his comments probably upset you but slinging mud back doesn’t accomplish anything.

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@vwolf198 Okay, I accept your apology and I apologize as well, you presented your opinion much better this time.

'Why did it take this long for you to finally realize that?' Dude c'mon, you were doing so well. Why did you have to try and slip this stupid little jab in? It took me so long to realize because YOU didn't properly convey your opinion initially.

@NessieNep The epilogue is going to be very fun ;)

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I’m glad that this argument ended with a mutual understand but that read was a trip and a half lmao.

Also rereading vwolf’s original comments I think one of the points he was trying to make was that it would have been nice to see more of the goddess Lilith flexing her deity powers. Some people find that hot.

Tbh that’s another thing I don’t think we get enough of is hentai with deities. Them using their deity powers to make us worship them is hot. :3

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@Eric Keldrev Yeah that would have been nice to see. Loved that power trip she was going through. But its fair that they wanted to go in a different direction this time around.

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@JTZ429 Reading through all @vwolf198 comments did he really needed to be so specific about his reason not liking it? He expected the villain to do more and she really didn't, therefore the story or plot or porn, whatever you want to call this.. which was more on the vanilla side was underwhelming to him compared to the first one he mentioned above. That's really all you needed to know and grasp. How much clarity did you really need? He didn't like it. You should have just told him to go read something else instead of pushing on about the subject because reading all that was asinine on both sides lol. It honestly should have stopped when he started talking about his expectations.

As far as this story goes, I'm not really a fan of the futa fucking, but it was nice to see some vore at the end and I hope to see more of that :)

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Hmm, reviving Iskra and giving her a body like that, there simply is no end to Lilith's generosity.
Even it is to use her as a slave.. like an actual slave this time, unlike the rest of her harem who are free of such magic.

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In the Immortal words of the Dagoth Ur:
"Omnipotent. Omniscient. Sovereign. Immutable. How sweet it is to be a god!”

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@lixiana - Indeed, i don't doubt Lilith's might for one sec but Lucy is so much further than that even (loved that comic too btw).
Lilith may be the alpha and omega level infinite eternal demon goddess now, but i'm still kinda nervous, hehe. Although.. she did obtain Iskra's vitality drain power, that might prove to be a valuable asset.
And let's not forget her current height isn't even her true size, she's keeping herself at that level for convenience. In any case, we'll just have to wait and see.. I'm sure it'll work out for everyone.

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@lixiana - Seeing those latest pages it's about to get down now, here's hoping your outcome will prove to be true.

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Do not, please dont fucking do it... god damnit dude.

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Please don't let Lucy win. That would be the worst ending for this story.

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@Stephen9001 Nothing wrong with that :)

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Man, that last panel on the last page with supermassive lilith and lucy with the planet between them would make a great wallpaper :P

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@flamebrandi Lilith's mother gave it to her before she died way back at the beginning of part 1

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@magno Ruin Lucy? Lmao okay, whatever dude

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Is there going to be any more pages showing what happens after? Hope we get to see Lilith fully absorb Lucy.

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With these last few pages, Lilith's story is officially concluded! I hope most of you enjoyed it, even if you only liked certain parts. As of right now, Astraea and I don't have any plans for a part 3, so this will likely be the last time we see Lilith. But, I'd love to work with Astraea again on another story sometime in the future.

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Tbh while I enjoyed Liliths arc I wasn't the biggest fan of Lucy in her own comic so this is my ideal ending especially since she isn't a mindless slave like Iskra I'm definitely looking forward to your next work.

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Can she only revive those she absorbed? Otherwise, couldn't she just revive her fallen people?

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Woa, a thousand years, pretty big timeskip. Makes you wonder what happened during that time.
I guess the world's still the same as it was when the girls arrived there and nothing else happened.
Well i guess chapter two is done now and everyone's happy, grats.

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Yeeeeeee~! That additional 1000 year time skip pretty much solidifies that this harem is made up of demigoddesses lol~!

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@NessieNep Demigoddess? Hmmm, I don't think I'd say that. Lilith has just been sharing her powers over vitality with her harem, basically giving them all eternal life.

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@JTZ429 Good to know. :3

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Kinda wondering though how come Iskra and Lucy are treated so differently cuz they both threatened to do really bad stuff heck what Lucy did was far worse?

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@flamebrandi Lilith felt personally betrayed by Iskra because she was the one who allowed Iskra to stay in power as ruler of the elves. Iskra also tried to manipulate Penelope, Charlotte, Stacy, and Kelly into helping her betray Lilith. Iskra has also potentially killed hundreds or even thousands of people across her long lifespan in order to retain her youth. While Lucy is more like a force of nature that Lilith just met, and has no prior connection to, so she deals out a lesser punishment.

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莉莉丝在众多圈内主角中的正常程度，就如同磁场癫佬中的明月圣王一般

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Good or semi good demon stories are a bit of a rarity and I like how wholesome this is. A nice change of pace.

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