I've always liked this one so here's an effort to replace the old garbage TL.

Translated by: Kenren (YakuDou.com)
Edited by: me

RAW: /g/2114555/87497603fd/
The "Prequel": /g/2363150/746a9020ce/

Ain't exactly my cup of tea but it does warm the heart to see a rescue job. Yozo deserves better than that last "TL".

Base +45, Ineedanadult +11, slapforce +6, Pr1de +19, Th3 Sl0th +6, AininChase +7, jason12052011 +7, Addelheim +22, sonictmp -7, Manakemia +7, gotl +16, firedragon89 +14, MRjellybear +6, and 6 more...

One of my favorites, thanks for bothering to redo this one. Appreciate it!

Base +8, Ineedanadult +11, slapforce +6, Pr1de +19, AininChase +7, sonictmp -7, firedragon89 +14, shuntensatsu +16, kingejn +6, RGZX34 +6, Not Benedict +6, Sylphvine +6, Worker Song7 -6, and 1 more...

After 3 translation I finally know the plot. And yeah it's dumb fuck but who care, the art are hot.

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It's weird that the artist did a first one that was vanilla, then went "Psyche!" However, I'll take what I can get.

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Why did he put "alter" in the title? This is a clear cristal sequel.

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@Zaiup because vanillacucks were harassing him about it on his twitter

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Ah yes, the age old NTR-bet. Next will be the blackmail episode? Not much room for clever plot devices within the trope

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"Hey. Wanna fuck?"

"No. Leave me alone."

"Hey... Did you know your master likes you and wants to fuck you?"

"No, he doesn't. Go away."

"I bet you he does. If I'm right you have to have tons of sex with me."

"Deal."

...Hentai logic at it's finest. I understand the 'plot' is just there as a vehicle for the porn, but still...

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الله القدير أعطني القوة.

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Page 9 first bubble, I'm pretty sure he is betting he can make her want to fuck with him
Not betting that the master want to fuck with her

Base +10, Gronberg +7, *NITE* +9, LordBarn -8, Gottagrin +6, dudeofalldudes -8

Nice job on the rescue.
Very nicely edited too.

Base +5, RGZX34 +6, kIsho Acrerion Orion -7, LordBarn +8

I can't help but laugh at the irony of calling them "vanillacucks" when NTR is all about cucking/being cucked.
I mean I like vanilla and NTR depending on the story/situation.

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I like the concept of land mine NTR where the prequel is vanilla and the sequel is NTR, but this one felt a bit too effortless in it's progression. It's just going through the motions.

Base +6, dudeorange -6, TheRokyando +7, Worker Song7 +6, LordBarn -8, chad001 -7

Japanese (RAW): /g/2114555/87497603fd/
Chinese (Translation): /g/1491743/b5b204f656/
English (Translation): /g/1504529/24a50a2058/
Spanish (Translation): /g/1716807/304917124d/
Portuguese (Translation): /g/1544702/4c8747c47f/
Text Cleaned (Translation): /g/1503794/2cd8e87c51/

Base +40, RGZX34 +6, Not Benedict +6, LordBarn +8

I'm all for replacing the dumpster fire I posted 3 years ago with something better, but I don't agree with the last and third to last bubbles of p12. There are some other small things that were cut or incorrect(in my view) but this is the most glaring issue I noticed:

おっと 最奥に到着～
マスターもたどり着いたことがない未開の地踏み荒らしちゃった（笑）
Oops- I've arrived at your deepest parts
Looks like I've invaded unexplored territory your master could never reach even if he tried. Hahaha

か～可哀そうに今日からアイツノサイズには戻らないわ
Aw how sad~ After today your pussy won't be able to go back to his size.

今日は俺の土地になるまでガンガン踏み荒らしてやるからなw
Because I'll be pounding away at this fresh land until it becomes mine haha

Feel free to run it through DeepL or a dictionary if you disagree.

Base +7, Lagmeme +12, LordBarn +8, Pr1de -19