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So this is what it means to be a simp. Settling for breadcrumbs of a relationship over an infuation of the chick that’s purely one sided, and all for you to lose…

That said though, the end would serve as an interesting start of a different story where MC only lets himself get into the relationship intending to marry her… Just so that he can document all the cuckolding and file a lawsuit lol. All to see the bitch burn…

Base +6, punkex -8, lostapostle777 +7, your_name +6, Fofotron +19

How much of a beta is the big guy he needs to compare himself to another beta like mc of all people?

Base +18, Gurenge +6, punkex -8, DRevan +7, Quflow +7, mahoraking13 -13, Leon979 +6, 58569 +6, MelmothTheWanderer -30, Corruptio Ultima +7

This is terrible

Base +6, punkex -8, Beta Faggot +6, blaqkthespian -6, mahoraking13 -13, MelmothTheWanderer -30

Self respect? What's that?

Base +6, Quflow +7, punkex -8, GypsyBastard +6

This could have had a decent ending, but the glasses guy simping so hard at the end was a bit too much.

Base +9, punkex -8, 58569 +6, MelmothTheWanderer -30, GypsyBastard +6

This could have been pretty decent alright you know? He fucked over, he didn't say enough or do shit, you sneeze you lose basically. Hell up to this point this feels real like maybe this happened to someone.

However what it drags it down for me it's that now the NTRman and the chick live literally obsessed with the idea to mess up with this wimp. Like, what in the world? You already got the chick and the girl got herself a man. It seems like their whole existance from now on revolves around this one wimp. This is some rent free shit, just vengeful she has to be?

If the following day the wimp suddenly fucking dies I'm sure these 2 would kill themselves because the chick no longer has the wimp to remind him of what "great girl" he's missing out and the other dude doesn't have a punching bag anymore to the point it's kinda gay in fact.

Base +6, blackjack88 +6, punkex -8, KuuhakuShiro +6, 58569 +6, MelmothTheWanderer -30, Otaku Soniz +6, Fofotron +19, GypsyBastard +6

I pray for happiness for my boy Shingo (MC is a dumbass who deserves everything that happens to him).

Base +6, akb568 +6, your_name +6, GypsyBastard +6

Every character here is pathetic.

Base +6, 58569 +6

Story is meh, personality of characters are terible, art is decent, but why oh why that fat fucker looks like failed Uruk-hai?

Base +9, GypsyBastard +6

004
OG: 恭介と紗也が一緒にいるとしっくりするな
TL: "It feels good when Kyosuke and Saya are together"
ED: he's saying they're made for each other

005
OG: おーこわっ
TL: N/A
ED: asking for seconds

006
OG: ごめん、じゃないでしょ、もうっ！
TL: "I'm not sorry, I know you're not,"
ED: this doesn't make sense so I'm not sure what you're going for here, but the original line is all spoken by a single person

007
OG: 卒業式の日にそんなこと言うなんて…
TL: "I can't believe you said that on our graduation day"
ED: "said" meaning "told her" (about him leaving for Tokyo)

008
OG: ここには僕がしっかり向き合わなくてはいけないものがあるんだ
TL: "There are things in here that I have to face"
ED: he's talking about the city not anything internal

012
OG: 紗也がこんな下品なことをするわけがない他人の空似だ…
TL: "Saya would never do such a vulgar thing"
ED: missing 2nd half of the line

014
OG: 恭介は何も悪いことしてないのに最低！
TL: "Kyosuke hasn't done anything wrong."
ED: missing 2nd part of line

017
OG: ハイ
TL: "Um"
ED: she is consenting

018
OG: そんな…
TL: "That..."
ED: this is an expression of disbelief

019
OG: 期待させておいて…
TL: "I'm going to give him what he want[sic]"
ED: he wants Kyousuke to get his hopes up

022
OG: どうでもいいだろ？
TL: "Why do you care?"
ED: he's not asking why, he's (rhetorically) asking if she even does

033
OG: オレだってほんとに大切な女を抱くのは初めてだぜ
TL: "This is the first time I've ever held a woman I really cared about"
ED: held?

037
OG: 紗也、壊れちゃうよぉ…
TL: "You'll break...Saya,"
ED: wrong speaker

OG: なんかおかしいの
TL: "Something's wrong"
ED: wrong definition

040
OG: うん…
TL: "Uh..."
ED: this is agreement once again

Base +32, akb568 +6, Fofotron +19, Per Dokuczacz +6

Okay, NTR (plot already see many times), but ¿what's the point of writing on the girl's body (and on the girl's part, letting herself be written like that) if you're not going to give the other a chance to SEE HER LIKE THIS?, ¿Has the author thought of that detail?.

Base +6

MC is the real winner here, he's living rent free in the heads of the girl and her bf so much they can't have sex without thinking about him.

Base +5