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[Muchuu Yakou (Kuromori Yaga)] Mahou Shoujo vs Futanari Sentouin Shimai | Magic Girl vs. Futanari Combatant Sisters [English] [racoonball]

[霧中夜行 (黒森ヤガ)] 魔法少女vsふたなり戦闘員姉妹 [英訳]

Doujinshi
(Disowned)
Posted:2023-03-28 05:44
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:19.63 MiB
Length:25 pages
Favorited:1600 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.38

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Posted on 28 March 2023, 05:44
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Posted on 28 March 2023, 07:55 by:   hamuxhamuxhamu    PM
Score +15
Not trying to be rude, but outside of the fact that you're still offering commissions despite clearly being inadequate at translating (evidenced by your previous uploads), your typesetting is pretty bad. Your fonts are too big, leading to your centering and general placement just being all over the place. Try reading these guides to learn & improve:
http://translatoranon.tumblr.com/tagged/guide
https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Having a QC checker would also be good.
Posted on 28 March 2023, 08:54 by:   i like halo    PM
Score +168
It is hard to find these types of stories where something like this happens and just the enjoyment of sex doesn't completely take over someone's mind and make them evil. I am glad this one didn't go that route.
Posted on 29 March 2023, 02:32 by:   FarkyMac    PM
Score -89
God, these faces are so fucking dumb.
Posted on 27 April 2023, 14:15 by:   rsx205    PM
Score +109
004
OG: 一般人もいる大学でも襲ってくるなんて
TL: "I can't believe you two attacked me at college when there were so many people there"
ED: emphasis isn't on the amount of people but the fact that they are nonmagical people

006
OG: どうする
TL: "What will you do...?!?"
ED: she's wondering about herself

010
OG: ケツ穴うんめぇ~
TL: "This butthole~"
ED: she says a little more than that

011
OG: だめなのに…♥ / 抵抗できないっっ♥♥
TL: "I can't...♥" / "Resist it anymore♥♥"
ED: missing first half, the TL is just the 2nd half split into both bubbles

OG: すごい熱気
TL: "I feel so unbelievably hot..."
ED: she's not talking about herself here

OG: 淫乱雌豚ちゃんには勿体ないくらいのでっかい♥ぶっとい♥おちんぽ様よ〜?♥
TL: "Are our dicks too big for a slutty pig like you? Hm~?"
ED: they're saying their big dicks are too good for a "slutty pig" (to reuse your TL) like her

018
OG: そういう意味でも雑魚なのね
TL: "So in that sense, you two are small fry too"
ED: she's explaining how that's the reason that they're "small fry" (to reuse your TL)

019
OG: さっきはこっちのチンポ舐めたんだっけ…
TL: "I had to suck your cock earlier..."
ED: she's trying to remember whose she had to suck earlier

020
OG: 締まりだけは一流ね…
TL: "Your pussy contractions are top notch"
ED: just the tightness alone is top notch

OG: ちんぽの形覚えてね?
TL: "Doesn't it remind you of the shape of your dicks?"
ED: this line is an imperative, and she doesn't talk about any reminding

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