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(C101) [Chocolate Land (kakao)] Koakuma Setsuko no Himitsu Vol.7 | The Secret of The Little Devil Setsuko vol.7 [English]

(C101) [ちょこれーとらんど (kakao)] 小悪魔せつこの秘密 vol.7 [英訳]

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Posted:2023-04-01 19:14
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Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:25.11 MiB
Length:31 pages
Favorited:306 times
Rating:
150
Average: 1.50

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Posted on 01 April 2023, 19:56 by:   rsx205    PM
Score +294
if we're being honest you didn't really translate much

005
OG: …わたくしおセックス鑑賞が大好きでして…っ♥
TL: "...I LOVE watching sex..."
ED: more than watching and closer to having an appreciation for it

010
OG: 動悸が / 止まらねぇ…
TL: "I can't stop" / "My heart from beating..."
ED: clearly the Chinese Room thought experiment doesn't account for contextual artwork

011
OG: あぁ…ッ!!
TL: "Ah...Tsu!!"
ED: fyi that's not even "tsu", it's a sokuon

OG: …っ!!
TL: "...Tsu!!"
ED: fyi that's not even "tsu", it's a sokuon

012
OG: せ…っ!!
TL: "...Tsu!!"
ED: this is just a stutter (directly related to next line). and fyi that's not even "tsu", it's a sokuon

OG: もぅ ズルいですわよ?
TL: "Isn't it cheating to step in like this?"
ED: this is just a general comment on being unfair but you added context that the Chinese TL added (樣插一脚是不是太狡猾了)

014
OG: まだイっちゃ駄目よ?
TL: "Still can't cum?"
ED: you got tricked by the question mark, she's not asking. the Chinese TL got this right too (還不能高潮哦?)

015
OG: 裕二の気持ち良い所は私が一番知ってんのよ♥
TL: "I'm the one who knows how to make Yuji feel the best"
ED: the superlative isn't describing the sensation, it's describing the person pleasuring him. the Chinese TL is kinda off (裕二最舒服的地方我知道的一清二楚哦)

020
OG: 長いですわね…♥
TL: "came a lot...♥"
ED: the meaning is the same but the statement is specifically about the length of time. the Chinese TL did not preserve this detail (真的射了好多呢)

OG: そんなに私が気持ち良かったの?
TL: "Did I feel really good?"
ED: she's asking if it was THAT good (directly related to prev line)

OG: あぁもう…!!
TL: "Ah really...!!"
ED: in Chinese 真是的 can be "really" but it's also an expression of annoyance. which the original Japanese text is as well. I kinda looked the other way the first few times
Posted on 01 April 2023, 21:16 by:   HaruLind    PM
Score +55
user Al Khwarizmi
>AI
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Posted on 01 April 2023, 21:53 by:   elzilcho111    PM
Score +445
What's happening lately? Feels like every day there's a new MTL upload with a TL page at the end saying it's their first upload and it's better than nothing.

Who is directing these people to EH/ExH? Like if they were actually regular uses of the sites they would know that nobody appreciates MTL work here, rather they would get abused in the comments for uploading the stuff.

This whole trend is just confusing.
Posted on 01 April 2023, 22:02 by:   Zaiup    PM
Score +189
nah, they do it for nh(e)ntai, they don't care about the quality of the translation and encourage people to keep doing MTL works mostly because the majority of nh users are ESL.
Posted on 01 April 2023, 22:02 by:   AriSapes    PM
Score +17
Of course.
The father of Algebra is good at Math, not at language translation.
Posted on 02 April 2023, 01:30 by:   DJ_Puchuu    PM
Score +23
Zaiup: another reason to hate NH? Sweet.

Foojack100: no, they're uploading shit here so the NH scraper bot picks it up for that site (if it picks it up at all).
Last edited on 03 April 2023, 12:33.
Posted on 02 April 2023, 05:40 by:   yetsun    PM
Score +121
A proper english translation is on the way by visikilagimetalika

/uploader/visikilagimetalika
Posted on 02 April 2023, 20:58 by:   Foojack100    PM
Score +12
Your average NH user is too stupid/lazy to get past sad panda, so it makes sense these dumpster translations are coming from there.
Posted on 06 April 2023, 19:07 by:   visikilagimetalika    PM
Score +19
@yetsun
Sorry for the delay. The initial upload had missing page so I haven't worked on it and been waiting for a new one.
Turned out the existing raw already has the missing page now, but I just realized it.
I just did only 4 pages so far, should be done this month or next. Idk, kinda hard to concentrate lately lol.
Thanks for the trust, really appreciate it.
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ah, I just finished my tl, was about to post it and realized someone else already posted a good one. I guess there's no need for me to post it.
Last edited on 13 April 2023, 14:30.

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