Translated by: TheHornySlayer
This is the only English version on the internet. I tried my best to keep the story as original as possible.
This was translated from Japanese to English.

If you have any request for a translation of a specific Hentai, you are more then welcomed to message me.
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Have a wonderful day and I hope you enjoy!

Japanese (RAW): /g/2482412/bc2148979d/

Base +41, dememes +6, DarkAholic -3

I'm not convinced you know any Japanese. Just on the first page you've completely omitted the 'w' in the raw which is the equivalent of 'lol' in the west. Also none of those lines are said by the boy, they're said by unseen observers.

Moving past the translation to just straight up English. 'Better go home' and 'From nearby its okay to get clothes, go home' are very poorly phrased. Its should be it's (it is). 'From nearby its ok to get clothes' makes no sense. Go home, should probably be and go home.

Base +43, Zakuzelo +14, cutegyaru +22, Doutey +11, eaglef2 +6, dememes +6, zorggn +6, Trolled1 +6

I wish to also add: Go home.

Base +6, eaglef2 +6, apagi +6, Trolled1 +6

Is there a decensored version?

Base +6, dememes +6