Maze is God's work

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There are other parts of this "story", some of them don't have text though (or at least I couldn't find it) but I also uploaded other image sets including these characters, just check my uploads.

003
OG: そんなに大きいの入るわけ…！
TL: "So-something is big is going in..."
ED: she's saying there's no way something that big would fit

005
OG: ん～、ハルはやっぱり名器やなぁ♥
TL: "You're really great Haru!"
ED: she's specifically talking about the qualities of her pussy

007
OG: ちが…う♥
TL: N/A
ED: untranslated denial

008
OG: 他の女の子とやっとった時は楽しかったと？
TL: "Did you have fun with the other girls when you were doing it?"
ED: she's asking if Haru had fun when she could fuck the other girls, the order of the current phrasing is ambiguous

OG: …わかりましたわ / おねがい♥
TL: "Please...I get it now"
ED: there are 2 different speakers here but you combined it into 1 line by 1 speaker, which changes the meaning

009
OG: ハルさんがご奉仕で私を満足させられたなら
TL: "I hope I'll be able to satisfy you, Haru"
ED: she's saying if Haru was able to satisfy her (Lily), cont'd

OG: イリスさんを説得して差し上げましょう
TL: "I'm sure Iris won't mind if I join"
ED: can be persuaded?

011
OG: リーダーの資質ってこの口にのことでしたの？
TL: "So this is the mouth I've been told about?"
ED: asking if this (oral) is what Haru meant by being a leader

017
OG: 無責任中出しばり気持ちよか
TL: "You're gripping me so indecently in there..."
ED: she's saying it feels good to creampie her without caring about anything

OG: こんなに気持ちいいなんて…
TL: "It feels so good..."
ED: missing tone of surprise

020
OG: もっとエッチしたか♥
TL: "I wanna fuck some more!"
ED: this is about the illness more than her own desires

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