Nice to have a translate.
Sad thing is the image quality comparing to original...

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this doujinshi is so good
both my dick and neck hurt after reading it

RAW:/g/2427016/2482e41855/

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3400pixel downgraded to 1800px

Why u do this

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Japanese (RAW): /g/2427016/2482e41855/
Chinese (Translation): /g/2432166/779e410ffc/
Korean (Translation): /g/2429192/2d955fa68d/

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hey I only read a few pages but a lot of the translation is wrong or made up fyi

003
OG: からかい好きな後輩
TL: "I know what she's doing"
ED: kouhai who likes teasing. I assume you meant this for the line above

OG: 先パイのことが大好きで心も体も支配したいしメロメロにさせたいと思っているが、性格がひねくれているのでつい意地悪しちゃう。
TL: "She loves her Senpai and wats to control his mind and body, and wants to make him fall in love, but his personality is twisted, and he ends up being mean."
ED: whose personality is twisted and ends up being mean?

OG: 先パイのSNSアカウントはかかさずチェックするなど、ちょっとだけストーカー気質あり。
TL: "Furthermore, she has a bit of a stalking temperament, such as checking the SNS account of her Senpai."
ED: missing detail, she's a stalker that's constantly checking her senpai's sns

OG: クスッ
TL: "Shit"
ED: this is laughter lol

004
OG: からかい好きな後輩
TL: "girl who likes to tease"
ED: kouhai, this occurs on subsequent pages too

OG: 先っぽ、舐めてほしいですか？♥それともカリですか？
TL: "Do you want me to lick it?♥Or put it inside?♥"
ED: she's asking if he wants the tip or the whole head licked

OG: どっちも、なんて贅沢ですよ先パイ
TL: "I think both are great, right, senpai...?"
ED: she's not asking, she's asserting that both of them would be a luxury for him

OG: あは、口パクパクして♥言えてないですよ？ほら、ちゃんと言って？
TL: "Ah, you can't say it in a hurry, can you? ♥ But still try to say it"
TL: you cut out the entire part before the heart, and there's nothing about "in a hurry"

005
OG: １回じゃ足りないって腰フリっ…♥
TL: "Just once is not enough...so I'll let you shake your hips..."
ED: she's making an assumption based on how he was moving

OG: おまんこ、ぎゅっぎゅってしてあげますからっ
TL: "I'll let you squeeze your dick in my tight pussy"
ED: her pussy's doing the squeezing

006
OG: また私に逆らえなくなっちゃいましたね、先パイ…♥
TL: "You can't go against me anyway, senpai..."
ED: wrong tense

007
OG: 下、はいてるかって？
TL: "Hey, tell me...?"
ED: she's asking if he thinks she's wearing anything down below

OG: さぁ、どっちだと思います…？
TL: "Does it look good on me...?"
ED: she's pressing him for his answer

e: ok how much mtl are you relying on? it looks like you're copying a lot of stuff 1:1

Last edited on 07 April 2023, 19:50.

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Mignon is just a magnet for bad translations. Unfortunate.

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有原图吗

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On page 2
Maybe change from "his" to "her"?

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just when i'm hyped upon seeing the first english translation, turned out they're horrible. i definitely can't fap to mtl. how will you take responsibility for my confused boner?

Last edited on 17 April 2023, 11:58.

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