currently working on a better and properly cleaned TL, stay tuned :)

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Last edited on 05 May 2023, 10:59.

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raw /s/77754d5629/2484372-171

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Don't put your dick in crazies

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while i'm at it

p1: "church school" => "christian school" / "religious school"
p1: "she's our class rep and is like this every day" => "she's been like this constantly since becoming class rep" (your TL misses the "なってから")
p2: "namu-san" => "my lord" (this was basically untranslated)
p3: "in place of" => "on behalf of" ("in place of" suggests the lord is hypothetically physically capable of dealing punishment)
p3: "unthinkable" => "extremely unexpected" / "foreign to you"
p3: "otenpensha" => "scourge" / "flail" (or include a TL note like you did on p5?)
p3: "from this place" => from where? you mistranslated/missed the "本場"
p3: "image" => "mental image/picture" (this was a direct katakana translation, but "image" alone doesn't convey the same meaning in english)
p4: "we're a community" => "we're in a public space"
p7: "you've all worked etc" => it's using the "ます" form, not the "た" form. she's expressing an intention to do something
p7: "i don't think you're that inexperienced" => "i don't think you're that pure/inexperienced anymore" (missed the "もう")
p8: "the heater broke" => "i accidentally turned the heater off"
p9: "those sort of" => "those sorts of" (whole sentence sounds unnatural tbh)
p9: "allow whatever pain you give me" => "accept whatever pain you give me" / "allow whatever pain you wish to inflict"
p13: "dispose of" => "exorcise"
p15: "this lewd me" => "my lewd self"? "this lewd me" sounds extremely awkward

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