Was this translated by an AI? It's "English" in the meaning that the words are spelled right and mean things but this cannot be the correct wording or phrases. Just from the first page: "Nothing today, nothing today" like...."Nothing to do today?" or "Such a boring day"?
"Busy chewing trees" you mean...sticks?
"Call me dental care" ....What? Like, "Call me mr dental care" or something??

I dont know Japanese so these are just guesses but the conversation flow is horrible and I can barely track what's going on outside the sex.

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Man, that translation is craaaazy good lol

This is like google translate level.

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I think this is google translate lol

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Dogs having sex is porn now? /grabs camera and heads to park

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I find this translation amusing. Who are we to judge how dogs talk? Maybe that is exactly how it would translate.

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"Back then I had a cute face that I knew nothing about." That's a 5 star rating right there.

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I can't often tell which character is speaking.

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most sentences have no point and have no connections.
couldn't understand the plot at all

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