The West... has fallen...

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Just a few TL thoughts.

p.4 That's his classmate specifically. クラス
p.6 She's not (specifically) in university. 学校 = school
p.12 She's not Chinese. Specifically, チャイナ refers to her dress (qipao). While I did laugh at the stupid racist accent, there's no indication in Japanese of that. Some of the emphasis at the end of sentences is in katakana, but it doesn't necessarily indicate that she speaks with an accent.
p.15 He doesn't look scared, but rather looks scary. そんな怖い顔して = lit. to make such a scary face

misc thoughts

p.21 Argh... implies she's not happy about him showing up, but in JP it's just あ～っ. More like "Aaah" or "Oooh!"
p.21 While "w" does literally mean "LOL", it's weird to translate it like that. You could just spell it out as "haha".
p.25 えいっえいっ is more of a teasing "take this and that!" rather than an actual "hey!"
where's the afterword? should add it even if not translated

You also forgot to add the hearts in the text sometimes (see p.27 for example.)

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1000yen to fuck your classmate? Yeah... I think she actually likes him and just uses that as an excuse.

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