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Takedown II: Fall of the 11th Countess (with new chapter 6)

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Posted:2023-04-17 17:54
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Language:English  
File Size:705.6 MiB
Length:280 pages
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Posted on 17 April 2023, 17:54 by:   lctr10    PM
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This comic is based on the PornEater story "Takedown" and the CrossroadsMK2 story "The Supernatural Adventures Of Lara Croft" from "Adult-FanFiction".

Version 3.0: Endless work has finally been completed and the next chapter is finally complete. Thanks to CrossroadsMK2 for his help with the text.

Added:
- Chapter 3
- Modified title page
- Chapter 2 (page 32 - modified text, page 33 - new page).

I don't use any website yet, the only place I can hear your feedback is this, so if you want, leave a comment or contact me in a private message.
I hope you enjoy the comic.

Version 4.0: Below is what is included in version 4.0. Many thanks to CrossroadsMK2 for his help with grammatical proofreading.

Added:
- Chapter 4 (new 57 story pages)
- Modified title page (glow effects of some objects)
- Minor correction in chapter 1 (page 7 - modified text in the fourth panel)

Enjoy the new part of the comic and if you want to say something or have a suggestion, leave me a comment or a private message.

Version 5.0: New chapter is finally here. Many thanks to CrossroadsMK2 for his proofreading.

Added:
- Chapter 5 (new 48 story pages)
- Modified title page (on version 5 designation)
- Minor correction on page 129 (text correction in the seventh panel)

Version 6.0: New Chapter 6 finally added. This chapter was divided into two parts. This is the first part. Thanks to CrossroadsMK2 for proofreading and improving the text.

Added:
- Chapter 6 (part 2) first 10 pages (261-270)

Added:
- Chapter 6 (part 2) second 10 pages (271-280)

Enjoy.
Posted on 31 August 2020, 05:29 by:   ntiger    PM
Score +41
Thank you so much for this. I know this isn't your writing, but I love how well you have been improving with Lara's thoroughly perverted adventures in anal.
Posted on 31 August 2020, 06:36 by:   lctr10    PM
Score +23
@ntiger, I'm glad you like it. This story is based on the work of CrossroadsMK2 (Idol Hathor on adult-fanfiction site). I recommend read his stories, it's amazing. Here in comics he makes a grammatical correction. The first Takedown was written by PornEater but he has now left adult-fanfiction site and his amazing work was deleted. However a long journey is planned for this new story, if readers like it here, I'll add more chapters soon.
Last edited on 31 August 2020, 19:56.
Posted on 30 September 2020, 13:21 by:   Arinupsterpkk    PM
Score +23
Please we need the next chapters!!! Your anal adventures of Lara Croft are the best!!!! If you open a patreon, i'll become your patreon for sure!!! Thank you for theese stories!!! 😎😎
Posted on 30 December 2020, 12:03 by:   Ruichi    PM
Score +16
Merry Christmas and Happy New as always thanks for the anal lara action. Do you have plans to use Wildeer's very hot lara again or it's just Classic for now?
Posted on 31 December 2020, 14:08 by:   lctr10    PM
Score +16
@Ruichi: Hi, I wish you a happy new year. For now, I want to complete this project, later I plan to move from XNA Lara to Blender and work with the Wildeer's Lara model.
Posted on 25 January 2021, 19:42 by:   outlawz3k    PM
Score +15
Great work again as always lctr10! As you already know I love those Oxford heels she is wearing in those last few slides (in the yellow top). I can't seem to find the original stories you base your work on anymore so wondering if you have them saved anywhere? Are you planning to follow those story lines in your comics?
Posted on 29 January 2021, 05:51 by:   buttman825    PM
Score +15
truly a masterclass anal series.i love all your work lctr10 and porneater.finally winston claim lara's asshole.
hopefully you can make a DAP scene for lara next time man,show more of her anal gape,big anal gapes.
i fuckin love it.
Posted on 19 March 2021, 15:49 by:   lctr10    PM
Score +16
@outlawz3k Unfortunately, PornEater stories are no longer on AFF and I only have their translation saved :-(
I'm currently working on chapter 4 and it will include some outfits with heels, but unfortunately it's not a version with a yellow top. In Chapter 5, I will make a scene where these heels shoes will be used for sex. Chapter 4 could be in April. That's my goal. Length: new 55 pages ;-)
Posted on 29 March 2021, 00:01 by:   outlawz3k    PM
Score +15
@lctr Awesome! Keep up the great work and I look forward to seeing part 4 & 5!!
Posted on 01 April 2021, 09:35 by:   lctr10    PM
Score +22
@outlawz3k Thanks, new chapter 4 is "done" but, now I insert the corrected text after grammar proofreading into the text boxes. The state is now 29 finished pages out of 57. My speed for applying corrected text is 10-12 pages per day if I have free time. If I receive a grammatical proofreading for the last 12 pages in time, I assume that Chapter 4 will be published on Easter Monday. It's strange but Christmas and Easter are my last year deadlines for releasing new chapters.

About private messages.
Thank you very much to all the readers to whom you send me private messages on the forum, I have read them and I am very glad that you like my work.
The reason I'm not responding is a strange 24 hour limit for one private message.
Posted on 24 April 2021, 13:40 by:   draznitelq    PM
Score +15
How come this awesome piece of art does not have "focus anal" tag? Absolutely priceless works @lctr10! I join one of the previous comments by yearning to keep thinngs to assfucking as they are. Alsho think that DAP, TAP and more and bigger gapes would be great! Do you have patreon or something - I would sign up instantly!
Posted on 25 April 2021, 14:23 by:   dookul    PM
Score +15
@lctr10, ch.04 is no less than remarkable ! WOW that's an ATM story for real! Keep the incredible job!
I can only concur with @draznitelq above, the bigger gapes you can feature, the better! And for part V if you could show a DAP with the mayor and Davie, it'd be a dream. I do think an anal contest between Lara, Miranda and Jane would be fabulous, including a lot of anal creampies to be swallowed by the bitches.
Anyway I know it'll be great and thank you for your work!!
Posted on 11 June 2021, 16:16 by:   outlawz3k    PM
Score +20
Brilliant work @lctr10 Never fail to deliver. Really can't wait for ch. 5!!!

Hey @lctr10, just wondering how you're getting on with the next chapter? Can't wait to see what more you can produce!!
Last edited on 03 September 2021, 20:24.
Posted on 13 December 2021, 23:40 by:   edyrn    PM
Score +15
this is a superb gift, another very nice job,
thank you very much.
had a good holiday, take care of yourself, and see you soon for another chapter. :)
Posted on 14 December 2021, 02:00 by:   ntiger    PM
Score +16
I was worried, but this is a glorious addition to your work. Happy holidays!
Posted on 18 December 2021, 10:18 by:   lctr10    PM
Score +29
Oops, the rating goes again from 4 stars to just 3.5 stars. Damn, this comic took me a lot of free time, especially the graphic postediting of the old Lara model from the TRU game. It is beautiful model of Lara that has been forgotten. I'm a little sad that this comic doesn't get a better rating, but most visitors probably prefer a compilation gallery of animators who make money on a subscriber or patreon than a comic that is released only here as rating shows. I am convinced that this comic has reached a higher quality than my previous ones with a better rating. Rating from you here is the motivation for me to continue. Yes, the visual side of this comic cannot compete with today's adult content animations, but I think this comic also has its qualities. On the other hand, I'm glad that some of you like this comic. I will try to complete the final chapter for you.
Last edited on 18 December 2021, 12:59.
Posted on 20 December 2021, 21:05 by:   edyrn    PM
Score +15
Hello,
Yes I also think that the aesthetic quality of this chapter is superior to the previous ones, but I think you would be wrong to take this note as a disavowal, it is more likely that the action was less responsive to readers.
from my point of view if this chapter may have a "flaw" it is that after Lara's "adventure", her actions and her choices in the previous chapter, she is here almost only a piece of half-conscious meat, and in view of the endurance of davis the power of the idol must not be foreign to it.
in any case, happy to see that you are still trying to improve yourself, and wanting to please as many people as possible should not do this to the detriment of your own pleasure.
keep on going :)
Posted on 09 January 2022, 22:08 by:   LePerilJeune    PM
Score +10
Hi ! I really love your work, I find it sensational !
I finished a version translated into French, but not very clean (by hiding the original texts), would it be possible to share your source files, without the texts?
Posted on 21 January 2022, 20:56 by:   lctr10    PM
Score +17
@LePerilJeune Hi, I have the source files in PSD (for photoshop) but they are too big. In layer mode, you can turn off text boxes and text. If you would like to take so much work and redo everything into French and you have a place where I can upload it, I can send it to you.
Posted on 24 January 2022, 01:24 by:   outlawz3k    PM
Score +15
@lctr10 don't be put off by the ratings mate. I still think you do great work as do many other people. Love your Lara comics and have done for a long while. I was hoping to see some more shoeplay with those sexy oxfords heels you said you would do in the 5th update so was a bit disappointed not to see that happen in the update however that does not, in any way, take away from the great work you have produced. The comic is still great!

I still kept the 5 star rating I have this comic and your 1st takedown one as well so keep it going my friend!
Posted on 02 February 2022, 17:09 by:   lctr10    PM
Score +23
@outlawz3k If no obstacle comes, Chapter 6 could appear very soon. I forgot with heeled shoes but I still have some space in the following parts. I've considered the two ends of the story, but most likely we'll have Chapter 6 Part A, Chapter 6 Part B, and Final Chapter 7. My goal is February 14 but I don't know how fast I can insert a text with a language proofreader. So far no promise with release date, but the first part of Chapter 6 (30 pages) without proofreading is already completed.
Last edited on 18 February 2022, 20:02.
Posted on 02 February 2022, 21:01 by:   outlawz3k    PM
Score +15
If you want to send some of the text my way I can try and aid you with the proof reading. Appreciate the reply and really look forward to the future chapters
Posted on 15 February 2022, 11:54 by:   lctr10    PM
Score +17
@outlawz3k Thank you very much for the offer, but CrossroadsMK2 is already doing this work for the comics.
I'm sorry I couldn't release the comics on that important day (February 14). I still haven't received a grammatical correction of the texts of the remaining 12 pages. As soon as I receive it, I immediately insert it into the comics and release it. I think I'm able to get the corrected text into a comics in a few hours. But so far I have no idea when the proofreader will send them to me. I sent the original text to him on February 5, but he does everything for me for free in his spare time, so we need to be patient. I think CrossroadsMK2 does amazing things with my original translated text.
Posted on 15 February 2022, 22:41 by:   outlawz3k    PM
Score +15
Hey no worries. Give the guy some time a he's done a great job so far with the texts. No rush from me pal and I'm sure the wait will be worth it a always.

You don't, by any chance, have the original stories by Porneater saved anywhere do you? I love his stories but it looks like he took them down. Would love to read through them again.
Posted on 18 February 2022, 20:01 by:   lctr10    PM
Score +17
@outlawz3k Not in English, but his work continues here https://archiveofourown.org/works/search?utf8=%E2%9C%93&work_search%5Bquery%5D=PornEater I really like the story called "House Arrest".
Posted on 20 February 2022, 22:02 by:   Extreme96    PM
Score +17
Chapter 6 is great and hot af i am really curious what will happen next in next part of chapter 6 and chapter 7 and what next sexy situations Lara will experience :)
Posted on 06 March 2022, 00:14 by:   outlawz3k    PM
Score +15
Chapter 6 is superb mate! Love where this is going. I hope she remains clothed during the gangbang. Don't find many clothes gangbang images and would love to hope to see those Oxford heels stay on at least. Really good update and I can't wait to see what comes next!!!

Hey @lctr10 hope you're well mate. Just thought I'd ask how things are looking for chapter 6b? Can't wait for it!
Last edited on 27 April 2022, 16:48.
Posted on 01 May 2022, 05:32 by:   lctr10    PM
Score +23
@outlawz3k: I'm fine, I'm planning an update for the summer. I have a lot of work and little free time. Now 19 pages completed, 16 pages work in progress.
Posted on 07 August 2022, 22:11 by:   outlawz3k    PM
Score +21
@lctr10 I can imagine you're very busy pal. Take your time. How are things going so far?

Really appreciate the work you do on these comics. If you ever offered commissions I would be first the first in line pal. Really like your work!
Posted on 09 August 2022, 18:34 by:   lctr10    PM
Score +17
Hello outlawz3k, the status is as follows: I don't want to promise anything because things are going very slowly. There must be a desire to create, otherwise it simply cannot be done. Takedown 2 completing chapter 6 is in ice stage now. Why? Right now I'm working on a new comic (reboot Lara) that I want to do completely and then publish in parts at regular intervals. I'm halfway there. Once I finish the new project, I'll get back to finishing the street gangbang part of Takedown 2 chapter 6. I was already tired of such a long comic. None of this is my job, I create it in the time I spend instead of playing video games or watching movies. If you are curious how things look, I can give you a sample of my work, send an email in a private message.
Posted on 18 August 2022, 14:01 by:   outlawz3k    PM
Score +15
@lctr10 Thanks for the reply and absolutely respect where you are coming from. Tried to send you a DM but I can't as your inbox is full
Posted on 26 September 2022, 18:37 by:   lctr10    PM
Score +29
@outlawz3k Hi now I have some space in inbox if you have any wishes. I'm still working on two comics in my spare time, hopefully I'll make it to Christmas. I have a lot of work now and little time to complete them.

Hi, here's a little update, I'm working on it, waiting to receive proofreading, then I'll put everything into the comic asap and update. Chapter 6 part 2 will be 39 pages. This was the first update with 10 pages.
Last edited on 16 February 2023, 21:26.
Posted on 19 February 2023, 03:16 by:   Animus Dominandi    PM
Score +9
Great work along the way! Any chances for a plan to work on another awesome PornEater story "Underworld: A Different Game"?
Posted on 20 February 2023, 12:09 by:   lctr10    PM
Score +21
Hi Animus Dominandi. No, PornEater has many great stories, but for me the goal is to finish this comic. I'm still waiting for the 29 pages to be proofread, once I get them I'll put them in the comic and upload them here. I also have chapter 7 for Takedown 2 and chapter 3 for Artifact Hunter comics in the works, but I don't have much free time to work on them.
Posted on 23 December 2023, 15:47 by:   KorlioMelo    PM
Score +18
Hi, any news on chapter 7 and takedown 2?

Merry Christmas
Posted on 05 March 2024, 19:23 by:   calypso904    PM
Score +19
Hii, been a fan since your first comic. Is there any update for next release?
Posted on 13 March 2024, 23:32 by:   KaorukoRiot    PM
Score +12
Hiii LCTR, i hope you find good

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