Different translation compared to the other one on EHG

The plot was horrible. The behaviour of the characters of this doujinshi doesn't represent the behaviour of the characters of the manga.

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this is an epic failed. even those babe are hot and the picture is good, but the story is very sad.
the artist must fix it in chapter 2 before it become epic failed

omg, i hope i was there to help yuuji. i really hoping it

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Once again proving that netorare artists are a bunch of fags who, more than just wishing they could even touch a girl during their pathetic lifespan, have serious problems in accepting the fact that other guys actually have girls who love them.

A bullet to the head might provide a swift solution to end their suffering, but in the meantime, thanks for fucking up our memories of a funny couple from what is surely a beloved anime to most of those who searched for this

Also, NailB, valoix, pirupururin, Secundus, bateman, BlickWinkel, TK162, Pseudoshy and Junnnnn are gigantic faggots with absolutely 0 chance of ever getting a life

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"i was disapointed" is all I can think to say on this unfortunatley...

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i think the story is very good ( i hated when it turns out like that but you must admith the arthur made it like that so you buy it in anger if it is a ordinary dojin it will not leave a impresion on any of us ) but if it has a second book of this pls make it more soft i mean i dont want to see the giurl stolen in front of the boy's eyes it is too painfull i've seen it atleast let it come back :D sorry if i made a mistake in my rithing

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Fuck you Japan and fuck you netorare.

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this has to be the laziest ntr I have ever seen

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he deserved this

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@Dooderz

LOL You miss the point so!!!!

If NTR makes you feel so much rage, then chances are that the problem is within you

You probably don't realize it, but you are a big NTR fan and these stories are tailor made to people like you!

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Fat guy deserved to die. Hold up let me get my gear and Katana n Sniper.

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Awesome, just awesome. Thank you NTR.

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I really liked the idea but it just wasnt what i was expecting

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http://www.doujinshi.org/book/344328/Shouko-to-Yuuji-to-NTR/
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Alt. English Translation: /g/239216/e59c64845c/
Spanish Translation: /g/623592/954ad2489e/
Portuguese Translation: /g/280485/81e2cf8cf2/
Russian Translation: /g/764952/574cd56ec6/
Korean Translation: /g/320618/12b22ce33d/
Chinese Translation: /g/250508/427c521640/

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@ballcock

you don't say? might I suggest that you embark on the once-in-a-lifetime experience of jumping into a meat grinder, then?

I imagine it's something you'll really hate, but don't worry! that just means you're a big fan of it and it's tailor made to people like you! besides, imagine how big a favor you'll be doing to the entire world

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