I don't know Japanese so did my best to try translate this so if there is any issues that is why and sorry for that

Oh my god a new Dancyo translation fantasti- oh.

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in the very first bubble the guy's saying "yo" (よーぉ) not "Yoshino" lol. her full name is Kana Kurose (黒瀬香菜)

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What's up with all these rewrites lately?

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If you don't speak english at a native-like level don't try to translate things into it. With your competent yet limited grasp of English you'd be better off translating native English works into your own language.

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02: Kurose San => Kurose-san
03: Yesterdays promise are you keeping it? => Are you keeping yesterday's promise?
03: Don't you wear it properly => Aren't you wearing it properly?
03: At least say hello, or no? => You can at least say hello, no?
03: Kurose's mouth | It doesn't exist for => Kurose's mouth is not for
04: Don't say nice things => Don't say such nice things / Aren't you being nice / You don't say / No kidding
04: only For => only for
04: All over the body it is => Her whole body is
04: What Kurose What is this => Say, Kurose, what is this?
05: Your Nipple => Your nipple
05: last class she was is => during the last class
05: Because [...] this kind of => Because [...], this kind of
05: welcome => (?)
05: Hurry take => Hurry, take
06: got better whore => got better, (you) whore
07: Kurose-san play => Kurose-san, play
08: It is ready to be put in => (wrong subject?)
09: Look Kurose-san => Look, Kurose-san,
09: Hello => (?)
09: momo-chan, => (?)
10: Ms. Kurose good job => Good job, Ms. Kurose / Good job, Kurose-san
11/14/15/17: Ms. Kurose => (inconsistent?) / Kurose-san
12: Should i stop => (wrong subject?) / Should we stop
12: rather then that | Let's => rather than that, let's
12: special stock taking => (?)
12: Can i [...] => Can i [...]?
13: ... when => ... When
13: it will be => It will be
13: Thank you... Thank you... => Thank you... very much... (?)
14: no... sorry... => No... Sorry...
14: again | good bye => again. Good bye / again, good bye.
15: Those glasses [...] their => That glasses guy / That four-eyes [...] his
15: absolutely Had => absolutely had
15: It is a real pervert => She is a real pervert
15: my | It is about that time => It- It's about time (?)
17: do it what's next => do it, what's next? / do it. What's next?
17: your uniform [...] make you [...] school exposure => (wrong subject?) / her uniform [...] make her [...] expose her to the whole school
19: punished hard => severely punished
19: yes => Yes

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Silent "Mobius" Kurose.

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