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please JP version

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I don't understand why Kuroi was translated as doing baby/uwu talk all the time, it's a pain to read and have to try to translate what he's actually saying all the time.

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This is kind of a pain in the ass to read. Not sure who thought it was a good idea to make him talk like that.

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I dunno if it happened in a previous doujin, but Kuroi has a seemingly fresh tongue piercing which is giving him the lisp

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Yes, officer, this doujin right here.

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I kinda hope everything turns out okay in the end.
It's quite rare for a hentai to go as far as detailing how those unlimited sex life affect them.

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@cherrynova147 but he has uwu talk even before the piercing in the sequence before his makeover

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God, I hate how he turned out. And he doesn't actually talk like that in JP does he?

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He's so far beyond redemption he's almost gone full circle.

Donbe actually agreeing to go out with him is probably the biggest twist this series could have had. Maybe she feels responsible for turning him into such a pathetic cock addict.

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@VNProtagonist Yes, he talks like that in the raw too. I still don't like to see it in the translation, and honestly I think they should only use it sparingly.

@beyblader I don't think she accepted. To me it reads like she turned him down. I don't actually like the translation for the last bubble, and I had to go to the raw for clarification. It's Donbe saying it, but Kuroi isn't a girl... so why say chick? Just seemed confusing who was saying it to me.

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I liked the first in the series, but as it went on, it seemed to be more and more a lesson of what happens when you lose to the dick. It's not all creampies and cum, relationships and the lives around you suffer too.

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You can tell this was reluctantly made with the lack of long sex scenes, and author going, "I might as well show the aftermath."

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"I can save her(♂)" my heart says, but no this one is actually really broken and it's tragic. We've known since the third comic, but Kuroi is a BPD retard slut with brain issues. It makes me weep in more ways than one.

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idk this Translation feels rough and very idk Modernized for zoomers?

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aw. i was hoping the other girl would be shemale like his other work

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@codemaster
I think it's possible that the last page is just another one of his delusions, but at the same time I think calling him a chick is either A. a translation error, or B. just part of the usual Futa-on-Male trope of referring to the boy as a girl. Either way I don't think that one detail discounts the point of the scene being her accepting his confession, even if the dialog is wrong the actual art implies she's saying yes.

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Still enjoyed this one quite a bit but there isn't a whole lot left to explore and it certainly could've ended earlier.
Regardless, I hope this guy makes more futa on male stuff, this collection has been amazing, top tier stuff one after another.

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Glad to see pretty much everyone agrees that, even if it's more accurate, the constant babytalk is horribly annoying and should probably be left out of the translation.

Sometimes it's okay to make a compromise on accuracy to the original Japanese to make something not be a horrible pain in the ass to read through.

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The way Kuroi talks highlights how cancerous he was

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I'm OK with the baby talk, we are supposed to be annoyed by this nuclear waste.
What annoys me is that no one is calling him out on this and Donbe is constantly giving the addict what he wants.
The moment her cock leaves his anus is the moment he is up to no good again.
What is the cure for such disorders? Beatings.

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Donbe likely feels markedly responsible for how things turned out. Kuroi was just an ordinary crossdressing chronic masturbator before she approached him and repeatedly fucked his brains out. He gave up on art (or any aspirations at all really) and became an anal addict pig bitch whose thoughts are monopolized by cock specifically Donbe thoroughly used him as her personal cumdumpster. It'd be cruel to simply wash your hands of the situation and walk away as if you had no personal stake now that everything has come to head and Kuroi is having a true meltdown. Donbe knew his drive for art was to live out his fantasies, she noticed cock was supplanting his personality and interests, she noticed that he was becoming disturbingly obsessive and that he was extremely unstable, and yet she continued to pump load upon load into his holes until his brain melted.

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the baby talk is great youll are cowards that dont even smoke crack

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Kuroi is the trash I fantasize to be but am too scared to live.

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