Fan translation by me, might go back and do the other chapter that hasn't been translated yet if i get time. This is my first translation so sorry if it sucks, I tried my best!

Virgin coomer going to be furious as fuck seing a 'fan' translation

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@Cl0n3z thanks so much for the translation! I really think we're close to the actual deed, she seems to be falling.

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These are the most polite perverts ever lol, how has no one yet dicked her is a big suspension of disbelief.

She is beginning to fall mentally though so maybe soon.

Thanks for the TL.

Last edited on 05 May 2023, 00:18.

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fyi

003
OG: こいつがここの店長で長川です
TL: "This here is the store manager, Nakagawa"
ED: his name is Nagakawa

OG: えへへ話には聞いてたけどこんなに可愛い人がねぇよっよろしく…
TL: "(Eeeh? He told me about her but he never mentioned she was this cute...) N-nice to meet you"
ED: not sure why the first part is in parentheses and refers to the wife in third person. he says it directly to her

014
OG: 追えっ
TL: "*follows*"
ED: this is spoken dialogue

015
OG: 何処行った？店内にいる筈探せ！
TL: "Where did she go? Split up and look!"
ED: he explicitly mentions she should still be in the store (directly related to next page)

016
OG: 居たか？
TL: "Did you see where she went?"
ED: he's just asking if she was there

OG: ダメ居なかった
TL: "Nope, didn't have time"
ED: idk why you rewrote this interaction but he doesn't talk about running out of time (directly related to prev page and next bubble)

017
OG: だろうな…無理があるけど
TL: "Right, I know its[sic] impossible but..."
ED: these are standalone thoughts, he mulls over possibility and then brushes it off (directly related to prev and next lines)

020
OG: はぁはぁ
TL: "Haha"
ED: this isn't laughter, you repeat this mistake throughout btw

OG: 記念に…はぁはぁやべぇ良いのかなぁ
TL: "*snaps pictures* To remember this event...Damn I wonder if it's ok?"
ED: this is all spoken dialogue

025
OG: もう無理…！ゆるしてぇ
TL: "No-..No more~ Forgive me"
ED: she's not asking for forgiveness

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