I think this is really awesome for a first try; the art is absolutely awesome and I didn't find any major issues with readability. Overall, a solid 4.5/5 from me, 5/5 on art and a 4/5 on story. That's judging based on the metric of a real light weight story, of course, but still. Good work!

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who is the artist?

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Thank you Sasha! I've been blocking out my next one and hopefully it has a slightly more coherent / in-depth plot. This means more pages which in turn means more art so I'll be putting a bit more effort into my next one than I have with this. I really appreciate your feedback.

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Wait, this is your first Manga? Incredibly well done! I look forward to your future work, you have potential! Of course, improvement is important - but with some anatomical detail and perhaps a more in-depth story, you could create some very outstanding content. Congrats on your excellent debut!

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Are you using AI generated pictures as the base and then painting and assembling over them?

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Outfit little inconsistent, you handled that much better in your second attempt. Otherwise, love drugs and mind break/mind control, so you scratched that itch fairly well! Loved the MC being a complete asshole to the woman using her, but a line about him not knowing her name or something would really hammer home how quickly he put her under control and how little interaction they had before.
Great work!

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They are using AI art judging off their last upload.

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