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Maybe you could have posted an editing bounty because those white rectangles you use to avoid redrawing the art are extremely obvious. Now I can't unsee them. Usually when people do this they use a black outline to fake it so it seems official.

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我就是……他娘的！核弹！（

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I only read a little bit but some lines seemed rewritten

003
OG: 子孫を大量に残して最強の種族に育てるのです！
TL: "You just need to have a large number of children!"
ED: missing 2nd half about raising them to be a powerful family

OG: 子持ちの父モブＡを演じるために一人ぐらいであれば
TL: "Even having one kid would be difficult"
ED: he's saying he could be a generic father if he had just one child (directly related to next line)

OG: 子供を勇者になれるまでこっそり訓練させるとしたら！？
TL: "What if I were to train him and he became some sort of hero?!
ED: he's comparing the prev line to secretly training his child to become a hero

OG: 絶対的な強さで追い詰め「I AM YOUR FATHER」父親宣言…！
TL: "Then I would have to use a cliche phrase like "I am your father"
ED: he talks about backing his child into a corner in a show of strength while saying that line

004
OG: ドンデン返しで陰の組織を世間に知らしめられそうだな。
TL: "Thinking about it I guess it would serve my long term interest"
ED: he's saying he could unexpectedly reveal his secret organization to the world

OG: シャドウガーデン存続の危機に！？
TL: "Why are they reacting like that?!"
ED: this is the narrator asking about Shadow Garden's existential crisis

005
OG: こうなったら…やるしかないじゃないか
TL: "Damn it...now I have no other choice but to be honest with them"
ED: he's just saying he has no choice (related to next line), it has nothing to do with being honest about anything but I guess you were influenced by the mistake in the next line

OG: 前世でAVから学んだ四十八手の知識を使うことになるとは！
TL: "The only experience I have of this from my previous life is watching adult videos!"
ED: he's saying he never imagined he would have to use his knowledge of 48 techniques he learned from porn during his previous life

007
OG: う…おぅ
TL: N/A

OG: この感触とテンポ、オナニーとは全く違う
TL: "This feeling...is totally different from masturbation"
ED: missing detail, he talks about the tempo too (directly related to next line which you didn't translate)

OG: だが、悪く感じない
TL: N/A

009
OG: 悪くないぞベータ
TL: "Cliche but not really bad"
ED: he's saying she (Beta) isn't bad at it bad

010
OG: アルファの最初の頃よりは入りやすい
TL: "She feels loose"
ED: he's comparing how easy it went inside her vs Alpha

OG: これがベータの責任の重さか…
TL: "Is this where Beta's emotions come from?"
ED: he's saying he can comprehend how Beta treats the importance of her duties

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There's an official English version in her gumroad...

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What a main character thing to do...

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Let's also add:

1. Obnoxious as fuck credits on the cover page. Leave your credit for the credit page.
2. Wrong 1280x downsized resolution, but judging from your Twitter, you're only "translating" for NH clout.

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How is this not a Devil May Cry doujin with that title

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This doujin is very in character of the Anime.

Love it xD

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https://phrysm.gumroad.com/l/INMPjp

Raw: /g/2511348/8cd6c21fcc/
Chinese: /g/2509044/a8b8c5fcbd/
Spanish: /g/2509454/dd5d430fdf/

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I hope to god it's your last translation if it's going to be this shoddy for all your future work.

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6666，什么地狱绘图

Base +5, adder -15

Art 6. Plot 6. Sexiness 6. Translation 3. True to character 8. All out of 10.

Base +9, fatboy213 -6

This was very on brand for each of the characters. It was really enjoyable reading how each of them would basically act in this type of situation to the point where you could hear their goof voices during the humor of the doujin that fits each of their characters. Great job!

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#1: <-- You are here

#1.5: /g/2740191/b6542bab9e/

#2: /g/2801387/a1b79ad23b/

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