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(Kouroumu 16) [Rocket Chousashitsu (Koza)] Aki x Aki Minoriaru Aki Shizuka ni Fukeyuku (Touhou Project) [English]

(紅楼夢16) [ロケット調査室 (コザ)] 秋×秋 穣りある秋 静かに更け行く (東方Project) [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2023-05-27 15:35
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Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:24.32 MiB
Length:13 pages
Favorited:173 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.01

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Posted on 27 May 2023, 17:00 by:   The Magi    PM
Score +20
Posted on 27 May 2023, 17:52 by:   mooncake47    PM
Score +2
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Posted on 28 May 2023, 07:52 by:   rsx205    PM
Score +66
it looks like you made up a lot of lines or cut out a lot of what they were saying
especially in the handwritten bubbles

002
OG: 作戦開始!
TL: N/A

OG: ヌキヌキ雛ちゃん
TL: "Kagiyama"
ED: you only TLed the name and not the rest of the line

OG: 早苗さんの裏奉納祭
TL: "Moriya"
ED: you only TLed the name, except you got the name wrong too

OG: 私に体をゆだねてください
TL: "Give me more of your faith"
ED: she's not just asking for faith

003
OG: 最近山の上に越してきた神様家族に信者がとられちゃってね
TL: "The family of gods who just moved to the top of the mountain recently took in a believer of theirs"
ED: they didn't just take one believer

OG: それで私たちもあっちの真似をして信者を増やそうと思って
TL: "So we're doing the same in order to increase our faith"
ED: they're not trying to increase faith

005
OG: うおっ先端にダブルな刺激がッ!!
TL: "I can't take it!"
ED: he's specifically talking about both of them licking the tip

OG: あはッ♡イッパイ出たぁ
TL: "Woah!"
ED: this is more than just a "woah"

006
OG: これからがホ・ン・パ・ン
TL: "You know what comes next, right?"
ED: she's not asking, she tells him what's coming next

007
OG: 神様のおまんこ…
TL: "The pussy..."
ED: you split this line across two bubbles

OG: 甘い匂い
TL: "Of a god..."
ED: this is part of the prev bubble and I assume you didn't get this one so you just split the prev one in half

OG: んあッ~ッ
TL: "It went in!~"
ED: made up line

010
OG: ナカにちょうらい
TL: "Be honest."
ED: rewritten line and from the wrong speaker's pov

etc
Posted on 28 May 2023, 15:15 by:   OnceForAll    PM
Score +42
Japanese (RAW): /g/1770598/1b45b16830/
Chinese (Translation): /g/1848237/e61c1328c6/

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