This is just the standalone prequel chapter.
Full story: /g/2574558/6d8a3ebe74/

Update: Added corrections/improvements.

Translation: Tekkamaki
Editing: SupaDupaMan2
RAWS: /g/2568111/2ee6f60fac/
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Sounds like hes setting her up to be gutter trash in the end. Unfortunate.

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@ valesauce why are you so mad bro? lmaoo

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This translation is incorrect in a bunch of places.

p1. せっかく東京に出てきたのに暇そーじゃん！
Tsubame is referring to the MC, not herself, and doesn't mention boredom. She's basically saying "Even though we came all the way to Tokyo, you look like you're not doing anything"

p2. 打ち上げ is an afterparty, not the club launching. She's saying "wanna at least come to the afterparty?"
地方出身同士大学でも仲良くしてな - She's saying that as fellow country folk, she wants to continue being friends with the MC, not that country folks have to make (new) friends.

p3. 舞い上がってて
"carried away" is more accurate than "high energy"

p4. 剝かれた - She's not stripping herself, he is the one stripping her.
The sex narration in the bottom half of the page is supposed to be a single sentence split up into multiple speech/thought bubbles

p8. 言えるか is "as if I could say!" not "why'd you ask"
俺も行けば良かったね - MC is wishing he could've gone to the afterparty, not "you should have come with me"
云々ってより - The TL omits the より and confuses the target of 一番の理由. These panels is essentially Tsubame's inner thoughts segueing into her spoken dialogue in the following panels, it's one cohesive uninterrupted logical structure. Tsubame is saying that MORE IMPORTANTLY than the scumbag, the number one reason she left the club is because she found someone she really liked and that person wouldn't join the club. This nuance is important because it emphasizes the importance of MC in Tsubame's life over the sex. The TL makes it look like she's just lying to him in these panels but the entire point is to show how much Tsubame loves the MC.

Terasu is reinforcing Tsubame's loyalty and the NTS theme here but the inaccurate TL makes it look like NTR bait.

Last edited on 07 June 2023, 17:07.

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@Orillio Thank you for your feedback. I'll make sure to correct the translation wherever necessary and discuss with the translator how this happened.

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@Orillio Thanks for the feedback. I'm still learning, and it's clear I missed some important nuance & wording here.

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Why is this being posted over and over

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it's pretty good

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who is that tanned girl on the credit page?

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@ICE user
Looks like the girl from /g/1690661/444b9e2e53/

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This story would be continued how many times? It is really raising my eyebrows.

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@ Orillio
Good looking out. I really hope this stays nts and that tsubame is loyal. Too many nts stories end up just being ntr and that just makes me sad.

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Art 7. Plot 7. Sexiness 7. Translation 7. All out of 10.

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