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damn this is good but if it only had a bit more pages for exposition this would become an instant hood classic

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Hot Damn but I need more page.

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Good for her and she is genuinely happy away from that loser ex-hubby. We more justified NTR, where assholes get NTR.

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raw: /s/15ece7fcc1/2538406-18

for a first release it looks good. i hope the translation is accurate.

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On the last page: "I never thought that just because that video turned you on..."
勃起できたから is quite literal here. It's not that the video turns on the husband but that he can get hard watching them. Remember, she complained he's impotent.
The translation should be more along the line of: "I never thought that because that video could make you hard, you would ask for more, you know..." "You were right to left me."

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@ncc1701z I'll work on getting better in the upcoming releases.

@agidyne You're right. I should have taken it literally. Thanks for clarifying.

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I'm a simple man. Was attracted by the cover.

Liked the story and enjoyed it - nice milf ( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)

Thanks for the translation :)

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General TL advice: don't stick to JP phrasing/expressions. It makes your stuff very awkward to read, if not borderline wrong because you're trying to do a 1:1 substitution and that rarely works.

Examples:

p.4 Have you ever... // been flirted with by a woman? > passive structure that is never used in English, and very bizarre wording/order. Here's what it should be:

"Is this the first time... // you've had a woman make a move on you?"

p.5 The inside of Mai-san's mouth. // It feels so good that my dick is melting. > Again, super awkward. Also, the "inside" of her mouth? As opposed to what? lol

"Ah! It feels like my dick's melting... // Her mouth feels so good!"

p.4 If you're up for busting, you can do it anytime. > Not very sexy, wordy, awkward.

"You can cum whenever you want."

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@cutegyaru Gonna take note of your advice for the upcoming releases. Thanks.

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If he was this much of a loser, he had it coming.

Where's my ending with gore and a meat cleaver when you need it?

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Didn't expect an eng tl already , many thanks

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did the wife lowkey want his husband to be better and reconsile? idk why i feel that sort of vibe

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