Latest chapter at page 462
Added bonus chapters
Page 383 - "Date"
Page 433 - "Sarah"
With that, this part of the story has come to an end.
Share your opinion, it's really important in terms of motivation! (Even bad ones)

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Regarding tags, there will be male:crossdressing, male:feminization, male:tomgirl and latter in story male:yaoi.
Everything else is not assigned by me and, alas, does not depend on me in any way.

I'm really liking this! keep going!

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this looks promising, I liked the writing , nice work

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Like the art, the story telling and the plot so far, keep up the great work!

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Keep going with your instincts, they serve you well so far. I'm really looking forward to more here. Love to see 'Ellie' get more feminized as the competition nears... long nails, higher heels, makeup etc!

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The initial plan is that Alan will find himself somewhere in between. But this does not exclude all the delights of life as a girl!
But I won't promise anything, even I don't know where the characters will end up!

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sad that this doesn't have any hrt aspect, self discovery based on a passing character seems almost futile if they're not going to go the extra mile that lets them retain that life.

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It doesn't make much sense to create a story that will repeat a lot of existing ones but in other decorations.
And the beauty of open ending is that the reader can imagine finale on its own discretion.

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What software do you use to make this?

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Koikatsu - CharaStudio and photoshop to add text

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CuteMente, I appreciate that you're trying something a little different from everybody else. The idea is great, I've always liked dancing stories. And I can relate to being something in-between - seems like the idea of true "crossdressers", people who are boyish sometimes and girly other times, is just not that common here in the west. So, thank you. I look forward to more.

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MistahM Thank you for your comment and thank you for reminding me of what I'm trying to tell! Because later Alan will get too carried away with pretending, and it is important that I, as an author, do not follow him! As for dancing, unfortunately my skills were not enough to show Alan's growth in terms of dancing, and therefore I did not add a chapter in which I tried to show it. But there will be a chapter with competitions ahead where I will try to pay due attention to this topic!

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I'll share.

Honestly alot of the recent Koikatsu stories are so incredibly long, which is fine, but is there a way to add some hot scenes?

Dreams of him having sex with the girl clothes on?
Or masturbating with the girl clothes on and feeling 10× better then normal

It's great, but I definitely think having some sex scenes is nice.
Especially a feminization work.

Heck the auntie can have a past of something happening.
This would make your work different.
Cause Koikatsu works recently have been so long without the characters doing anything hot for 800+ pages.
Fixing this problem would be great

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I can't deny that things aren't moving very fast, but by the end of chapter 9 there will be erotic scenes that will continue into chapter 10. There will be sex scenes in Chapter 15, and by the end of the 2nd part of the story there will be a chapter completely devoted to this (chapter 18 or 19)
P.S. Initially I planned to add more scenes of 18+, but I realized that I just didn't have enough time to finish the story otherwise! (I have to finish before the end of the summer, as I won't be able to combine work, study and creating a comic once a week.)

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Her wig is better than her hair even late, and I can tell this is leading her to being with that guy, but I kind of hope she ends up with her lesbian friend long term. That ladies boyfriend needs to go and what better replacement than the girl he bullied.

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What can I say, if you expect a simple porn story, it's probably not worth wasting your time to continue reading. As for the hair, it's a matter of taste, but beyond that, it's part of the "development" of the character within the logic of the story. Still, thanks for commenting!

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Her wig is better than her hair even late, and I can tell this is leading her to being with that guy, but I kind of hope she ends up with her lesbian friend long term. That ladies boyfriend needs to go and what better replacement than the girl he bullied.

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Came for the porn, stayed for the wholesome story. I really enjoy that it doesn't move very fast, I like the characters, and I especially appreciate the relationship between Alice and her mother. Honestly even if there was no 18+ scene at all until the end I would still continue enjoying reading it (still looking forward to them tho). I only wish she ends up with one of her female friends, I'm not a fan of the main character "switching" their sexuality at the same time as their gender (and also I prefer some girl on girl action). But hey, just my personnal taste, I'll keep reading and enjoying the story regardless of who she ends up with! Great work!

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I didn't want to overload the story with detailed information. But in commentary will try explain concept behind creating Alan (Alice). So according to primary sexual characteristics, he is a Boy, but in this case, due to hormonal abnormalities, he did not go through "normal" puberty, remaining androgynous. In this regard, he also has a low libido. As for the partners, it depends on what role he perceives himself in (later in the story I will try to pay a little attention to this, while trying not to overload the plot) Therefore, as it is not difficult to guess, in part 2 of the story Alan will try to test himself in the role of Alice...
There will also be part 3, but revealing anything will be too much of a spoiler
What else I would like to add is that it is very difficult to find the right platform for distribution for this story. Sex is a very important part of human life and therefore I will show it in comic. But from the perspective of the majority, it will be a "perversion" and therefore such story will not be suitable for most platforms.

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Maybe patreon is the better way to enlarge the number of subscribers

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In my circumstances, page on Patreon is useless.

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This is a great work. Thank you for sharing it here.

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I read your comments on the last page. I have to say, creator's job can be (and most of the time is) a tough one. You are competing with every other artist and, additionally, with different means of entertainment: books, movies, games, comics, youtube videos, amusement parks, sports, you name it. Everyone's time and money are finite. Getting enough attention to your works (especially in a niche genre) in a long run is a difficult task.

My favourite example for these types of topics is wildbow. He's the writer of some lenghty web-serials (Worm, Ward, Pact, Twig, Pale, first one is amazing, and I still haven't finished second one). Worm, for example, contains 1.6kk+ words. For that work, he published 2 chapters in a week (each one is 4k? 5k words?) for 2.5-3 year duration. He lives in Canada and his income, i think, is only from patreon (or was for quite some time). So achieving somewhat average salary of a canadian in patreon subscriptions took him 4-6 years of that intense schedule.
Sadly, i can't find his old comment with detailed description of his experience on financial independence subreddit, but you can find more info here: /r/Parahumans/comments/6pwb8d/comment/dktdb17/

TLDR: Overall, the choise is yours. If you are willing to continue, don't give up.

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Well I would like to explain a little, my words rather was caused by emotions.
Now, some time passed.
So, creation of this story has never been for the purpose of making money, but can't deny I was hoping that someone will support and it will make sense to continue. Without that, spending 30 hours weekly when you also have work and personal life just not reasonable.
And the main disappointment from working on this story, is complete lack of reaction from people (community on "E" is very impersonal, so i've tried create server in discord). What I'm trying to say is that there is no feeling that what I'm doing is have meaning for anyone at all, this not causes emotions in people.
And maybe I'm wrong, but what happened in the last chapter at least should have caused astonishment, indignation, or just negativity in my direction.

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I really enjoyed of the witty lines between friends and families inside the story. Got a feeling that Alice is restricting herself to be heterosexual and in binary gender identity a bit too much, but under the the influence of her father, it totally makes sense. Thanks for putting all this stories together, CuteMente you are doing a great job!

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