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EN Translation: PostNutClarity/PNC
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>because I wanted an english translation already
Oh, surely this must be a really old release that has a 0 percent chance of ever being translated, ri---

>Release date
>June 24, 2023

I'm not sure how I feel how about you people making barely legible (machine) translations hoping someone "makes a better translation". All you're doing is making sure nobody's gonna re-translate this unless they do it out of spite. And trust me, there's too much of that already, so your chances are now less than 0.

every page: awful phrasing

rough translation

Page 2
Your TL: It must be hard getting all the way up here...
JP: 配達ご苦労
Intent: She's just thanking him? Why the long-winded, partially made-up extrapolatery line?

Page 3
Your TL: I was going to have tea. You should come have one too.
JP: 茶でも飲んで行くと良い
Intent: The whole "I was going to have tea." part is made up. "Come have a cup of tea before you leave."

Page 3
Your TL: What kind of tea?
JP: お茶って・・・
Intent: That's not what he's saying. He's not even really asking her anything.

Page 4
Your TL: no, no... yeah
JP: い、いえ・・・っ
Intent: This one's hilarious. It's how I assume your brain worked when you were deciding whether to keep the nonsense DeepL gave you. He's just stuttering a "no."

Page 6
Your TL: You got like this...
JP: こんなにして・・・
Intent: As with almost everything in Japanese, it's a context-dependent line that doesn't make sense if taken at literal face value. "Oh my... // Look at how hard you've gotten..." She's not making a matter-of-fact statement like your line implies.

Page 7
Your TL: ara ara...
JP: フフ・・・
Intent: It's cringe enough when people literally translate ara ara as is. You don't need to make them up when they're not there.

Page 7
Your TL: You also look great down here, boy
JP: 見かけによらず立派だな・・・
Intent: Why does line make no sense? Oh, it's because you need to look up what 見かけによらず means in a dictionary.

Page 10
Your TL: I'm getting excited
JP: ビクビクしてきたぞ
Intent: Wrong speaker. Also, not what she's saying.

Page 10
Your TL: I can't hold back any longer
JP: もう限界か
Intent: Wrong speaker. Again. Also, it's a question.

Page 10
Your TL: Otherwise, it'd be troublesome for you...
JP: ・・・そうでないと困るよ
Intent: Oh boy. This is so off the mark idk how to explain it without actually giving you the correct answer. Hint: she's a woman and wants her womanly charms to work.

Anyway, this is just a sample. Considering how little text this even has, I'm impressed by how much is wrong.

Last edited on 26 June 2023, 02:49.

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delete your account

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I would've rather you just binned this.

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If you truly were post nut clarity you would had realized that MTL are just fucking garbage

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I'm neither native English speaker nor Japanese speaker, but I can clearly see the translation is shit af.

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Damn, can't even enjoy it. The translations man. Feels like they just used google translate.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BVxjanRhq7o

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As a fellow part-time, dogshit machine translator, i'd recommend translating old abandoned dojins. There are plenty.

People are mad because you might spook good translators. Our place is in the dark, brother.

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lol. lmao, even. give me a couple hours.

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