Translation, typeset and image edit by me.

Hello everyone, this is actually the first time I ever translated/typesetted something.
I wanted to do see this work translated for a long time, and coincidentally someone did MTL this a few days ago! But I already had about 25 pages translated, so I couldn't stop that far!

It took me about 14~16 hours of work to get this done, the hardest part was the translation in fact! (I am intermediate at Japanese), the typing and editing was easy enough, but took too long.

Any feedback is appreciated! I don't know if I ever gonna do it again in the future!

Some of the Author's Links:

PIXIV: https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/412239
FANTIA: https://fantia.jp/fanclubs/95404
DL: https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ407682.html
FANZA: https://al.dmm.co.jp/?lurl=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.dmm.co.jp%2Fdc%2Fdoujin%2F-%2Fdetail%2F%3D%2Fcid%3Dd_279521%2F&af_id=hipopura-003&ch=link_tool&ch_id=link

Great work! Love a happy end gender bender story.

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I misspelled some things in the translation... Oh well

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You could use a prereader, some of the lines are awkwardly phrased. And the grammar isn't perfect.

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"Oh no, my plan to escape didn't immediately work out. Guess I'll just go evil now."

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Very good! Coincidentally it was translated yesterday by someone else but that version looks pretty bad.

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Thank you for gracing E-Hentai with a properly translated and typeset version after the previously done release. I know how much of a bastard good-looking typesetting can be. You're doing the Lord's work! The only thing I might recommend for the translation side is to not be overly literal with the translation. I noticed some unnatural preposition choices, and I suspect you might be translating the particles over as well. But I found much of it pretty good sounding.

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I'm the uploader of the anon MTL translation version, I thought a proper version wouldn't come out for a long time so I uploaded that version.

I've started a petition to expunge on my lower quality version so this version can be the only version.

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@Bravesa Decent work for your first submission. I would recommend looking up scanlation typesetting guides if you plan to do more in the future. They provide guidelines on how to put dialogue in word bubbles easier to read and more aesthetically pleasing. Also the main character's name: When you have a held sound, it usually changes the romanized pronunciation. So Ado-kun would be アドくん whereas アードくん would most likely be Ard-kun.

Last edited on 04 October 2023, 22:07.

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