Kind Oji-san , you rarely see nowadays .

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fairly wholesome entry from a Rocket Monkey NTR work!

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Until I saw her and her boyfriend in their school uniforms, I thought they were older and husband and wife.

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What the fuck is wrong with that grammar? Sometimes it's hard to make sense of what is being said...

I stopped at:
-I'm sorry... Could you stop being like this?
-Huh... ?
-We're students. My pure relationship with Mika is...
-Y...You're only saying that now...

My understanding looking at the raw with rough English:
-Sorry... Could you stop being like this?
-Eh... ?
-We are x school students.
You and me... I mean... our pure relationship...
-But you never brought that up until now...

What convinced me to switch to the raw:
-If you said that at school, then it'll be a weird rumor. So, don't say that.

-I can't talk about that at school because it would become a troublesome rumor if I did, you know.

Last edited on 03 July 2023, 04:22.

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̶F̶Y̶I̶,̶ ̶Y̶o̶u̶ ̶i̶n̶c̶l̶u̶d̶e̶d̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶p̶a̶g̶e̶ ̶2̶5̶ ̶r̶a̶w̶ ̶i̶n̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶g̶a̶l̶l̶e̶r̶y̶.̶

Edit: It's fixed now.

Last edited on 14 July 2023, 01:29.

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@Bulopu
Welcome to CGrascal. That's what 20 years of experience looks like.

I'm adding a few more nonsensical lines:

p.4 what's with the straighten up sigh
p.5 i need a little bit more charming or senpai
p.6 I make sure to reply to him > the rest of the conversation is the past tense so this doesn't make sense
p.28 we went three times > we did it
p.28 into thinking it be > is
p.28 i'm pissed with you > at
p.28 good work with today > cut with
p.30 i told you earlier that those feelings make me happy > this is complete nonsense in context. what does this even mean? what does this tie into?
p.30 i understand! but with senpai [...] > this entire sequence is also nonsense.
p.31 and food like bananas > foods
p.37 it sucking down on me
p.39 we can do an enema together > worded like this it implies they're both giving themselves enemas ("we can do drugs together").
p.43 i'm capable in sucking > of
p.43 in teasing > to tease
p.43 he loosen > loosens
p.50 you got it loose every day > you've been loosening it every day
p.56 this keeps up > if
p.68 what am I even doing here in school > at
p.68 becasue
p.69 it's good that our schedule met up > lined up, schedules
p.80 i'm packing your cheeks > what? lol
p.80 i'm twisting your pussy around > that's literally impossible. "I'm twisting my fingers around in your pussy."
p.82 you borrowed out > you borrowed
p.88 yes. but, this way is so good? > i'm so confused as to why this is worded as an affirmative interrogation
p.90 you're still up more > i'm gonna assume you meant "up for more"

Last edited on 03 August 2023, 20:50.

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>What the fuck is wrong with that grammar?
First time on a CGrascal gallery, uh?

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Haven't seen Rocket Monkey works in a bit.

Base +6, wootwoot123 +6

>What the fuck is wrong with that grammar?
It's an index for how far CGrascal went into rewrite territory. The worse the grammar the further away he is from what is actually written in the japanese original.
Well, that's at least my conclusion after trying to fix at least the grammar on some of his translations with the help of MTL.

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What the hell is this Rocket Monkey? It feels so weird to read this (grammar aside)

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Oji san is not that bad though.

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Let me guess... she's going to train how to be pregnant by getting knocked up with Oji-san's seed?

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Pages 26, 35, 42 and 57 are in Japanese and you've already translated them. Fix it please and thanks for sharing.

Base +12, animadversion +6

I think kouhen gonna be like this... for some "valid" reason she's gonna meet again with the old guy and in the end with a smile on her face(like all of them) gonna keep with the "training" for whoever excuse she invented for herself!!!!

Base +6, zenyaku +8

I had hope one Rocket Monkey work wasn't going to be another NTR but I can tell this is going the same route the rest went. Oh well

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Seeing this get the CGrascal treatment feels more NTR than the actual NTR.

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I see Rocket Monkey, I favorite.

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Looks like by her habits she is going to end up looking like her new boyfriend lol.

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All things considered, for a cheating whore from hentai manga she actually broke up with her boyfriend pretty quickly and painlessly and didn't drag on the affair too much.

Good for her.

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@ Korou
Fair point

Base +18

lmao, spoke too soon. Still, this is pretty lighthearted compared to his other works which can get extremely dark.

Base +6

Thank you for translating this one, it is great.

Base +6

She actually made the right decision to dump the boyfriend, because he simply wasn't that interested in her when it came to sex stuff.

Base +9, K81f +6, mnemonicstar +7, lesbogal +7

Cant thing a more painless and honest way of ending this story , good work RM.

Base +2, mnemonicstar +7

Typical case of dumbass male who doesn't ask what his girlfriend wants and enjoys.

Base +6, Zoinks +6, K81f +6

This one really felt like the poor hardworking ojisan was getting cucked by a limp dicked faggot.

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HOW ARE YOU STILL PUTTING OUT THESE TRANSLATIONS?! Bro, this is insane. Your name is a bigger red flag than a guro tag.

Base +7

@Korou
She's not a cheating whore, you are.

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