Cleaned up some images with better masking to avoid loss of detail with PS:
003, 007, 010

Cleaned up translation of redundancies, grammar and honorifics
004, 021

This should be the last update, enjoy!

just so sweet

Base +4, Evildoomnerd +6, MechWarriorNY +10, SecretiveGamer +14, rain_pour_32 +2, UnseenTrash +6, clockbot +6, baneonplane +8

Either you hunt or be hunted.

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fully censored: *cries emoji*

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Fanza:
https://book.dmm.co.jp/product/4221648/b120ahit01609/

DLsite:
https://www.dlsite.com/books/work/=/product_id/BJ594531.html

Base +19

Just a few comments.

1. Level your images. Your colors are pretty faded, and you're also working in RGB (hence the weird brown tint). Work in greyscale. Here's a basic visual guide: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/902314557077336064/997654450149789757/optimize_image.jpg
2. Some of your TL doesn't make sense. See p.6: Oh, it's so interesting, isn't it? おおお！面白いじゃない！ 面白い can mean interesting, but here it means "to be fun" > Ooh. This is pretty fun!
3. More editing guides below.

General: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Redrawing: also check out Firefly on PS.

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Enoof trembling in your boots, a hoonter must hoont and a fooker must fook.

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RULES OF NATURE!

Base +6, fattius_pattius +6, MechWarriorNY +10, baneonplane +8, Capuchuu +7, EXR +6, kiritogamer24 +6, PinguPrin +7

i should become a freelance writer

Base +6, baneonplane +8, Capuchuu +7, EXR +6, PinguPrin +7

where is Chinese hero！！！

Base +2, biscardone -8, slapforce -6, LRaglan -6, Seabook -6, Keltzar -6, crowns -6, Romi the Byzantine -7, Teh_Red_Guy -12, lazorboy96 -6, GERlton +6

pg2 box 6 has "I've" instead of "she's".

Base +6, B1u3z +9