Why you using those colored fonts? Makes no sense. You've also managed to bloat the size of your files by 100%.
p.7 i'm keeping my journal at a distance > this doesn't make sense p.7 is like a dream came true p.8 am I even deserved to be love? p.9 I shouldn't have develop p.10 i can't help but falling p.15 i'm starting to move > i'm gonna start moving (action hasn't begun yet) p.16 i'm lovin it > lovin' p.20 overthere p.21 it make p.21 if he know p.22 sense p.23 good luck on your assignment / i will > the answer makes no sense. "Thanks." is enough p.27 everytime p.27 you can do all sorts of naughty things you have ever wanted! > you can do all the naughty you've ever wanted to/dreamed of! p.29 did you saw