The start of this was ok, but falls apart by the middle and the end is just annoying. Sabu did something similar but waaaay better, especially the ending. Wish more artists didn't get held back by mainstream porn "plots" and let lose.
You can do anything when drawing, show anything, but you make stuff that looks like a cheap cosplay porn video, why?
But hey, that's just my opinion, and I'm not saying that this is bad, but it felt lacking to me. I guess I was spoiled by what Sabu did.