Asaki Takayuki is one of the exceptionally rare JP mangakas trying to reach out to an English audience (since 2018, if you can believe that. True OG.) Go support his Patreon and his English version.

Unfortunately, his English isn't very good, so I felt like doing this justice. Hopefully he shamelessly steals my translation and my typesetting one day :)

Also, remember to always fuck your bros (platonically.)

Translation: cutegyaru
Cleaning/Redrawing: rocketman
Typesetting/Lettering: cutegyaru
Cover Page: Kyoto Grand

Contact:

Website - cutestgyaru.com
Discord - cutegyaru
Email - [email protected]

Raw: /g/2608281/1ce241bdc4/

edit: title shenanigans
edit2: typo on p.12
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Just bros ♂ being bros ♀

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DEEP ♀ DARK ♀ FANTASY

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Literal Gold

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Thanks so much for the translation! I was considering doing a translation too cause I loved it so much, but I am glad to see it was handled by such a capable group :)

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that thumbnail looks like a man, glad it's not

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The gayest straight sex I have ever seen

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Already? God I love cutegyaru

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>draw a man
>call it a woman

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What the fuck is that anatomy on page 10

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Trap-ception

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Thanks for the translation. I pre-ordered 3 copies of this.

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girl got that hentai protag haircut.

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dammmmn this is so fucking hot.

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I mean there's tomboy and there's just being a dude.

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The life and suffering of Sir Rowan

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Artist has theiw phases to be sure, loli -> plump -> brick

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Glad to see this translated.

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Any girl that's willing to play dress-up is prime wifu material.

You gotta wife that girl now, Mateo!

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It goes to show just how androgynous a manga style can be and why in the absence of big boobs it's difficult to tell gender apart in many of the manga styles.

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Asaki is the new Tolkien.

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This is just gay sex with pussy

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BEST HENTAI EVER

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Tomboy supremacy

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This is vanilla doujin and yet it feels gay to read. Also, what is going on with this dude body on page 10? It's like half his body is on one side of the bath and the other half on the other side...

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no homo (Unironically)

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@cutegyaru

thank you so much for localizing your translation and using words that english-speakers would actually use during sex or other situations. I've been getting so tired of the robotic, 1:1 JP->EN transliterations done by poor ESL people for shit pay on sites like doujins.com, or lazy natives with good intentions but no localization/vocabulary/editing skill. They are so unnatural and completely unsexy. Nobody talks like that in english in NA or the English Commonwealth during sex. 1:1 transliterations have ruined so many otherwise extremely sexy doujins/manga for me. If I have to read "knocking on my womb" or "penis milk" one more time I'm going to barf. I'm sure everyone who reads this will have their own pet-peeve 1:1 translations that don't sound natural or sexy in english.

Your uses of "pounding my cervix" and "fat wads of cum," or "fat cock" (where other translators would use boring phrases like "huge thing" or "thick penis"), were such breaths of fresh air and sounded so natural that I orgasmed mentally on each occasion where I recognized where a boring phrasing would normally be used by lazy TLs but you were creative and sexy. This is the first TL of yours that I've read (I think) but I'll be searching out others for sure.

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"Did you think I was a guy"...HE CALLED YOU "SIR"!

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@Loki The Flameshield
Now that I think about it, that's on me lol. The honorific used in Japanese is gender neutral. On the other hand, it's not (historically or in manga) uncommon to "masculinize" titles while still referring to women (demon "lord", anyone?) Let's just assume that's what Rowan thought :)

@SANPH
Glad you like it. Translation isn't just about being accurate (granted, that's the most important part), it's also conveying the original intent as naturally as possible in the target language.

Last edited on 29 August 2023, 21:16.

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she looks like d'arce from fear and hunger

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@cutegyaru

Right, what sounds sexy in Japanese isn't always going to sound sexy in English on a 1:1 basis. Constrictions of language can shape some aspects of culture, and the constrictions of culture in turn shapes language in a sort of linguistic-evolutionary feedback loop. "Penis milk/cockmilk" and "knocking on my womb" might sound sexy to an adult Japanese reader (in the original Japanese), but it sounds like something a child would say in NA English. The first being completely unsexy and immature-sounding, and the second conjuring images of a man knocking on a girls lower abdomen as one would a door. I see those two phrases in hentai all the time but I'm sure you can think of others.

This is why I think some localization, maybe even over-localization specifically of hentai is important. Erotic intent is as important as literal meaning, and in some cases (for me anyway) erotic intent is more important for immersion, so the English phrasing should try to hit that same intent rather than being strictly literal to the original text.

There are some hobby/labor-of-love groups that come close to this ideal but something about the way you did this one really hit home for me.

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an amazing surprise, great fab material and strangely, a kinda nice story/character dynamic

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Pg.11 Okay this genuinely made me laugh. "No worries dude, all I saw was your MASSIVE BITCH-BREAKING PHALLUS, I think it's totally cool."

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rather masculine

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She could be an MMA fighter in real life. Her body type should be featured more in porn.

@everyone

This doujin showed up on FAKKU, so best to archive it before state censors poop us.

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@pihip
Odds that my version gets nuked are very low.

The FAKKU version is actually Asaki's own translation, which he made available on his Patreon before. If anything, you guys should go buy it.

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Just a good ol' Brojob.

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I KNEEL out of respect to any and all reverse trap connoisseurs

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