Japanese version (Raw): /g/2506678/b408f41267/

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Artist twitter: https://twitter.com/hashimuraaoki

Part 1: /g/2284615/3572ff72fd/
Part 2: /g/2396695/6f52ecc22e/
Part 3: /g/2396696/2687c63c77/
Part 4: /g/2500924/c20671eb7c/
Part 5: <here>

Pls I need this but in Spanish

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Happy™ End.

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For a Hashimura Aoki story, I suppose the ending could have been much worse for the girls

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I know right , with no dismemberment , blood or gory , this is practically romantic.

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so instead making these four girls his baby factories from the start
he sold off these girls to slavery only to buy them again when they already mangled and parasitized

is this guy super S or just his fetish for a second hand product is that deep

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I think you forgot to run this past your prereaders. There are some typos and dubiously placed text lines.

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He didn't leave them completely maimed, and he will probably let them die at some point. That's outright merciful for Aoki.

Aoki has some kind of despair fetish.

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buy → but

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01: her pissers weak => (verb rather than plural) / her pisser's weak
05: more [...] then => more [...] than
05: parasitic monsters that seems => (plural) / parasitic monsters that seem
08: in it's subject => (possessive rather than verb) / in its subject
13: useles => useless
17: Don't say that I'll pay. => (incoherent without punctuation) / Don't say that, I'll pay.
18: give them to you buy => give them to you but
18: fused with it => (parasites are plural) / fused with them
18: withou => without
18: sharing it's sense => (possessive rather than verb) / sharing its sense
23: cuming => (wrong verb) / cumming
23: from just => just from
23: you wont be => (auxiliary rather than verb) / you won't be
23: yo're => you're
28: these bitches bodies => (possessive) / these bitches' bodies
28: And the former princesses... All of them are => (preposition needed or single sentence) / And as for the former princesses... All of them are / And the former princesses... are all
28: They'll bear my children until [...] are incapable of bearing children => (repetitive) / They'll bear my children until [...] are no more capable / They'll bear my children until [...] aren't capable anymore

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This series kind of spoiled itself from the first chapter, ever since the guy raped and enslaved the girl who already liked and was nice to him. Unlikely as it was I was kinda hoping he wouldn't win.

Last edited on 31 July 2023, 19:41.

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That foot at page 11 lol, it looks so wonky

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really hoped he did more to mindbreak melia since she hated him so much

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作者的画风一直没有进步啊。。

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@ Larequirem - it's worth noting that he raped all four girls until he got bored with them and *then* sold them into slavery. So everyone else had *his* second-hand goods.

And since they were able to survive for a year with owners just as (or possibly even more brutal than) he was, he bought them back so that they could finally produce his heirs.

I'm amused that some of the girls actually still had some fight in them at the end, but not like they can do anything. Heh.

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Well, that was certainly a bit of a wild ride...

Normally, I'm not really inclined to root for the 'bad guy' in a doujin... but, in a funny sort of way, I'm kinda glad he got that W - put it this way, he's a hell of a lot smarter than your average creep. Plus, those three really b*tchy princesses *WERE* kinda asking for it..!

Ngl, though, I do still feel kinda bad for the first chick, since she seemed to get the worst outta all of them, even though she'd done the least to deserve it... alas, such is a hentai heroines fate!

Now, if you'll excuse me, I think I need to go take a long shower...

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