Original Release on Pixiv: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/110306668

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Created by Kawaii Tsun'aho
https://www.pixiv.me/kawaii-tsunaho
https://twitter.com/KawaiiTsunAho
https://kawaii-tsunaho.fanbox.cc/
https://www.patreon.com/KawaiiTsunaho

Engine / instrument used in creation of the gallery - id est: "Photoshop", "Maya", "Koikatsu", or "Skyrim" - should NEVER be used in tagging regardless of anything else.

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真不错

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Uninteresting story, just like your "work" which is a copy/paste almost every time. No effort on character creation, poor color management and maps.

Speaking of maps, having looked at the mods on Koikatsu, there are a ton of maps, but out of laziness, you always use the same ones. The same goes for the outfits, unless you've got a fetish for schoolgirls, they suck! Can't you really take your time to create a good story, with original characters? Is that too much to ask?

How so many people like the same stories is beyond me. I guess you've been doing this for a while, so move your ass and make some effort, because if it's just to post your crap on the site, you can stay on Pixiv.

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@pranarom
Yes, "work". That's the closest word I think describes my stuff. Other than that, care to elaborate?
What was uninteresting? What's copy/paste? If you aren't significantly interested in TSF related stuff, sorry, but you're not the target audience and I highly recommend you don't read my stuff. It's solely that and that isn't going to change. Theres areas I think I need to improve in but I doubt we're thinking about the same thing.

I don't agree remotely on how much effort you think I put into character creation, they're made to what I want. What do you mean by poor colour management? (Unless you mean the speech bubble colours which, yeah, I can agree with that for this one) Vague complaints are not helpful and a waste of your own time writing them.

Unless you've actually tried using the maps available on Koikatsu, you really can't comment on them or say I'm being lazy not using them. Sure, they're there, they exist but most of them are not ported very well and suffer from numoerous issues. Bad lighting, complete mismatch with character design, often have weird transparency issues, aren't "complete"; leaving walls, door ways and such open to the void. I regularly try using other maps to try to avoid repeating, but they just don't work for what I want, suit the scene and other maps used in other scenes or the lighting clashes too much with the characters to the point it's distracting. I have no interest in forcing myself to use maps that don't work just to keep them different. The maps aren't the focus of the work and are only there to show location and give setting.

Yes, I have been doing this for a while, every single work involves trying something different. "Move my ass and make some effort"? Lol.

It's not to post on ehentai at all, I frankly don't want to. There's no actual benefit in doing so, I've literally confirmed it. I outright avoided it for a long time and I've only resorted to it because I keep seeing others posting my stuff here, doing it with no attempts at any form of credit and, in one case, claiming they did it. I had those taken down but I have better things to do than continue to play wack a mole. It takes less time to just do it myself than carry on having them taken down. Unless ehentai starts banning it, It's inveitably going to continue happening and I'd rather it be done right if it all.

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很有趣和励志的故事，拯救了三个的“人格”。

另外，很有趣，似乎是原作者上传的，有点少见。

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Thanks to everyone who downvoted my comment, I see criticizing an artist hurts your little weeb heart xD

Anyway, I'll expand on my criticisms in a much more detailed post:
-1: What's uninteresting to ME is the fact that you reproduce pretty much the same pattern for each of your stories. There's a change of body or a transformation or a possession, ect... The man who becomes a woman lives his most beautiful life, he gets a dream life with nothing in return and the real women are pushed aside (too difficult to develop or laziness?).

Secondly, what's repetitive is that the characters aren't developed. The exchange takes place, that's all, there's going to be sex, the humiliation of people who've lost their bodies and that's it! If you think that's all there is to a story, I invite you to open a book/comic/manga.

As far as the audience is concerned, tough luck for you, I love the themes of bodyswap as well as gender bender, I can name some artists I like: Tira , yayayayi, みゆびしぎ, ect...

-2: I'll say it again, your characters all look alike physically and even mentally. Guys who get a new body without any trade-offs to endure, life changes that are too difficult, things that just don't get it. Gender-bending or body-swapping isn't just about sex and playing dumb chicks.

-3: Direction! I note that according to you, few maps are good, okay, so explain to me why even with good maps, you can't manage light, shadows and background blur well? Is this also an option that doesn't work well under Koikatsu? Because, strangely enough, Tira manages to render better than you.

Another point: your comics lack SFX, no sound effects, few bubbles, no frames. You're content with the bare minimum, and to me, that's lazy.

And I can confirm that getting off your ass will do you a world of good. I've been on your discord and apart from people congratulating you, nobody dares to make a criticism. I can understand that coming from someone as haughty as you.

If you don't like criticism, post your stories elsewhere, E-hentai is renowned for its raw community, so either accept criticism or say nothing.

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クールストーリー

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Thank you for coming back and expanding your feedback.

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Please post change ring 7 on e-hentai

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