Translated because I wanted to read it but could not.
I do not speak Japanese, I used translation tools and context to translate this and got help from people that do know Japanese to translate difficult parts.
Have fun reading.

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You used the wrong 1280x resolution. Originals are at 1919 x 2716.

Also, a lot of this is just... wrong. You clearly tried to make whatever the MTL gave you readable, but in the process, you made shit up or omitted half the original sentence.

rough translation

Page 3
Your TL: This is the worst
JP: 最悪の休日だ・・・
Intent: Worst weekend ever...

Page 4
Your TL: What the hell
JP: なーんてね
Intent: Nah. Wrong speaker, and she's still in the spirit of teasing her.

Page 4
Your TL: Did you just cum lightly from just your nipples being touched?
JP: 触ってないのに触れる想像 ...
Intent: This is really wrong and makes no sense in context (which you supposedly used?) She never touched her nipples.

Page 4
Your TL: No, No!
JP: ち、違う！！イってな・・・
Intent: I feel like this is really incomplete. "No, you're w-wrong! I didn't cum at a...

Page 7
Your TL: Now go to the toilet
JP: は、はやくトイレに・・・
Intent: Wrong speaker, not what is said either.

Page 7
Your TL: But before that....
JP: その前に・・・
Intent: It's wrong because the way it's phrased makes it sound like a follow-up to the previous line, but you used the wrong speaker then. "Before I let you..." or even just removing the "but".

Page 7
Your TL: S-stop!
JP: 出ちゃう
Intent: Nah. You made this up. Look 出る up in a dictionary.

Page 8
Your TL: Forced anal as punishment for dirtying the room
JP: クリでイった後は部屋を汚した罰で強制アナル責め
Intent: "After she made me cum with my clit, she punished me for dirtying her room by forcibly playing around with my asshole."

Page 8
Your TL: Even my dog doesn't dirty the floor
JP: 私が飼ってる犬ですら排泄はトイレでできるわよ？
Intent: Not what she says. "Even my dog knows how to ask for the door."

Page 8
Your TL: You just had to cum and dirty the floor...
JP:お説教中にイっちゃうなんて本当どうしようもないわね・・・
Intent: To think you'd even cum while I'm in the middle of scolding you. God, you're hopeless...

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Good thing there are a lot of really dedicated translators in the yuri community. Hopefully this will get a good translation before too long.

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Broke: Nursing your unrequited love.
Woke: Confessing to your crush.
Bespoke: Break her mind with sex and blackmail and make her tell you that she love you.

Which way, modern woman?

Last edited on 04 August 2023, 21:56.

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I don't think that this works.

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Doesn't even seem like it was proofread.

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