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[Haruharudo] Charao ni Netorare Route 3 Toile de... [English]

[はるはる堂] チャラ男に寝取られ ルート3 トイレで… [英語]

Doujinshi
Posted:2023-08-01 05:41
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Language:English  
File Size:79.68 MiB
Length:62 pages
Favorited:619 times
Rating:
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Average: 3.81

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Posted on 01 August 2023, 05:41 by:   alfredmeow    PM
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source from south plus, bought and uploaded by 380e51ed, thanks a lot!

raw:https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ01071476.html

380e51ed :

DL:https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ01071476.html
网上搜不到就买了,这个作者几个系列我都蛮喜欢的,好像要出新作了。
原包丢上来了,不知道有没有大佬汉化一下,有对话框空白的版本
看英文没那味
Posted on 01 August 2023, 07:47 by:   Chris2999    PM
Score +76
That "antidote" reads more like wishful thinking, we dont even get to see what happens to her, so half-assed.
Posted on 01 August 2023, 11:28 by:   Wilfriback    PM
Score +76
That's because it's copied from the other route as the author was just lazy and just wanted to do anal sex doujin featuring Madoka.
Posted on 01 August 2023, 19:22 by:   orasmase    PM
Score +145
01: Root => (as in story) / Route
01: The toilet that escaped from class and rushed => (nonsense)
01: who was playing => (incoherent, nonsense)
03: See; this. => (Japanese syntax) / Look at this.
03: dude => (wrong gender) / girl
03: Already slimy What is it? => (Japanese syntax)
04: I do not do => I don't / (nonsense)
04: them => (no plural reference) / it
05: your flesh of the vagina => (wrong possession) / the flesh of your vagina
05: The sensitivity [...] it will => (Japanese syntax) / The sensitivity [...] will
05: But too slippery => (missing subject and verb)
05: in the case of => (sentence end missing)
06: favorite? this situation => (Japanese syntax) / Isn't this situation your favorite?
06: while saying... ass movement don't stop => (Japanese syntax, 3rd person) / You say that... while you keep moving your ass
07: when it becomes => (sentence end missing)
08: Men's restroom... With a cheating partner... Mating in cowgirl position... => (missing verb) / You're in the men's restroom... with a cheating partner... mating in cowgirl position...
08: you call... reluctantly => (incoherent, wrong character)
09: As might be expected it's unreasonable => As expected, it might have been unreasonable
09: Nutcha => (not an English onomatopoeia)
09: Is obscene sound annoying? => (missing article, also rhetoric uses negation) / Isn't this obscene sound annoying?
09: because [...] so => (one too many conjunction)
09: your secreting => (not a possessive but an auxiliary) / you're secreting
09: you want kiss a lot => (verb or plural noun) / you want to kiss a lot / you want a lot of kisses
10: to say while... stick your tongue in => (missing subject) / You say that... while you stick your tongue in
10: But already the limit => (missing subject and verb) / But i'm already at my limit
10: unnoticed let's do it => (Japanese syntax) / Let's do it, unnoticed
... and so on. Also a lot upper case misuse.
Posted on 06 August 2023, 23:50 by:   motaku96    PM
Score +4
It's easier to read the japanese.
Posted on 07 May 2024, 12:58 by:   and970    PM
Score +6
I would have preferred the mtl they are doing nowadays

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