thanks for the tl part 1 /g/2504668/c680ee827e/

Last edited on 05 August 2023, 23:17.

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thanks a lot mate!
Please translate the first chapter too

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Japanese (RAW): /g/2621827/b34a156700/

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Wow the poor beta cuck will never get a chance to smash. But then again even if he did after all the sex she was having with that well hung Tyrone I am willing to bet she wouldn't even feel it with beta.

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I'm not here to fap but read some comments and story, and practice my writing skills a little bit. anyway

pg.01

JP: 私と付き合いたいって？
TL: You're saying you want to date me?
OP: So, do you want to date me?
justification: she's not asking.

(the line following is also incorrect but I'm skipping that. the remaining lines on the page are...okay in translation, but riddled with English issues.)

pg.02

JP: 雑魚穴すぐ使えるように準備してきました！
TL: I've prepared my puny hole for your immediate use!
OP: I'm ready for your own pleasure
justification: left out sentence object

JP: あなたのオナホ穴サクッと気持ちよくなってもらえるように飛んできました！
TL: Your flesh onahole came right over to make you feel good!
OP: I came as quickly as possibl e to make you feel good.
justification: replaced subject of "your onahole hole" with "I"

JP: 彼氏とのデートすっぽかしてきました お情けでもいいので穴潰してください
TL: I stood my boyfriend up on a date for this. I don't need any sympathy, so please smash my holes
OP: I missed my date with my boyfriend...
justification: she didn't "miss" the date, she purposefully skipped it.

JP: 卵子ボコってください！
TL: and steamroll my eggs!
OP: Please don't be merciful and crush my holes.
justification: outright omitted/replaced with the second half of the previous bubble.

JP: またその動画？
TL: (You're watching) That video, again?
OP: Oh, that video
justification: dismissive tone not present in the JP. and it's a question.

JP: 私のスマホに入ってるエッチな動画何でも見ていいて言ったけど
TL: I know I said that you could watch any of the lewd videos on my phone, but
OP: You said you were okay with that, right?
justification: where's the question?

JP: 先週撮ったその動画好きすぎだろ♥
TL: you're way too obsessed with the video I took last week.
OP: I told you, you can look at whatever naughty video I have on my phone ♡
justification: clearly meant for the last bubble (still incorrect though), meaning this line was omitted.

JP: 彼氏のお前じゃないおちんぽに負けた雌の姿♥
TL: The sight of a bitch conquered by a dick that doesn't belong to you, my boyfriend ♥
OP: You're not my boyfriend, you're just my bitch ♡
justification: my TL is too long, but the JP is talking about *her* being the bitch, and that the *dick* belongs to "not my boyfriend" not that he isn't her boyfriend.

JP: お前はただの彼氏
TL: You're just a "boyfriend."
OP: You are just my bitch. ♡
justification: clearly an attempt to retrofit a mistranslation from the above line.

JP: ご主人様との交尾のためのスパイス♥
TL: You're just a side dish to sex with my master ♥
OP: I am your master ♡
justification: conflates master to her, when it's about *her* master.

edit: oh yeah, the title is a bit off, too. おねえさん is not "older sister" but "older woman". this is not incest. in page 1 we're told the dude has only known the gal for a couple of months, even.

Last edited on 17 August 2023, 11:31.

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Her face is so perfect <3

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It should have been me,not him

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tagging rtl (comment by @ehuehuehueh)

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This bitch went too far with the poor idiot loser ha ha

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