Guys I know that the translation sucks, and many people complained about it, if in the future there will be a better translation I will gladly transfer it to the color version

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English translated by WolfieTL, You are here!

p.1 your tired
p.1 don't make a sound just because I'm giving you guidance > nonsense
p.1 you really don't have the strength or the stamina > "the" should be "any". using "the" implies a specific goal. you don't have the stamina [to XYZ].
p.1 it's too hard for you to be alone? > more nonsense. how does this tie into any of the previous or following dialogue?
p.1 that doesn't matter c'mon let's do some weight training > one of the rare instances I'm going to flag lack of punctuation as a mistake just because it fucks with the syntax so much it makes the sentence confusing
p.3 I'm so weak > clearly not the right speaker, making this, again, nonsense
p.4 if my squats
p.4 it's getting harder and harder > referring to what? squats? lol
p.5 im
p.6 your weak

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