01: Yah => (you should actually translate this) / Hey
02: did keeps => (emphasized verb stays in base form) / did keep
03: The girl who recently interrupting me every break time. => (verb missing + link reference with previous introduction + likely wrong action) / Lately, this girl has been disrupting me every break time.
03: how-many => how many
03: she will just ignores => (you should prefer present for repetitive action) / she just ignores
03: lead to violence although => (prefer add punctuation) / lead to violence, although
03: yet as of now => (redundant) / yet
03: a wrong person to mess up => (maybe prefer a definite article + maybe wrong preposition) / the wrong person to mess with
05: Thanks to [...] and [...] and those achievements that [...]... I can => (accumulation + verb missing) / With [...], [...], and achievements, I [...]... Now I can
05: my teachers trust => (possessive missing) / my teachers' trust
06: I can't concentrate => (passed act) / I couldn't concentrate
06: its going => (use auxiliary here, not possessive) / it's going
06: if ever touches it => (missing subject) / if anything touches it / if I ever touch it
07: for now until => (redundant) / until
08: How menace => (intensifying uses an adverb) / How menacing
08: Nani?!! => (should be translated?)
09: Its not => (use verb here, not possessive) / It's not
11: I'm going crazy no more => (incoherent with the following dialogue, missing punctuation?) / I'm going crazy. No more.
15: so hard and she's => (consequence should use "that" instead) / so hard that she's / so hard she's
16: near at my limit please => (no preposition needed + punctuation needed) / near my limit, please
18: isn't a bit => (missing subject) / isn't it a bit
18: its quite cold here => (use verb here, not possessive) / it's quite cold here
18: Isn't your parents => (inconsistent number) / Aren't you parents
18: It is... => (maybe prefer using conditional) / It would be... / That would be...
19: clinic => (if speaking of the school's) / infirmary
21: Its so => (use verb here, not possessive) / It's not
22: Its still => (use verb here, not possessive) / It's still
24: Like that push => (punctuation needed) / Like that! Push
Also, isn't the work incomplete?

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Thanks for pointing out such mistakes, I didn't do a proofread so.. Lol
But anyways, thanks. That will really help in the future.
And yeah, I think so too. It feels incomplete, but it's the only source I can find online.

Update: Fixed the grammar errors, which @orasmase pointed out. I made sure to do proofreading this time, so it should be ok now.

Last edited on 20 August 2023, 06:46.

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"Translators note: In raws, he said "야" which means yah! (hey) in Korean"
"YAH!!! GET OFF! YAH!!!"

Just according to Keikaku.

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@Waitugreat "Just as planned"

I guess I'll just leave that one.

@orasmase about page 8, its intentional. I wrote "Nani?" instead of "what" for meme purposes lol. Though, it sounds very unprofessional.

Last edited on 20 August 2023, 12:24.

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Always do proofreading and don't leave shit untranslated.

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