男主终于不用再应付这群母猪了，究竟是好是坏

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I guess nobody from the beginning won...

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中间是不是还少了一话

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竟然没反杀，惊了

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Feel anticlimatic

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That's it? No turn around? Randomly inserted antagonist wins everything forever in the last two chapters?

...............alright then? I guess it's no big loss, not like the dude wasn't already whoring the girls out. Still an odd way to end a series. I'm not sure who this appeals to anymore lol

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Damn, so it wasn't a fake out. I guess the author just got tired of this series.

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Not a very good ending imo

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It's the "twist" that so many manga and anime get fucked over with thanks to the culture.
https://www.writerswrite.co.za/kishotenketsu-the-secret-of-plotless-story-structure/

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没反杀太可惜了，私车都变公交车了啊啊啊啊啊啊！

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There is probably gonna be an AFTER chapter, or a tankobon bonus but

ehh, tbh after the husband NTR it kind of lost the plot

EDIT: @PAMRZ

The issue isn't MC lost, it's that he lost to someone who came out of nowhere

Last edited on 04 September 2023, 03:38.

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我靠，居然没反杀，没意思.

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Good guide on how to shotgun a story in the head at the last second. What a waste. Of time and talent.

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我能说什么呢，1号去fanza买了有这一篇的集合本，结果告诉我没反杀，女主们还都变成了公共厕所给那个bba赚钱，仿佛回想起了看橘家的感受。
作者你是不是搞错方向了啊，当初看这类本子图的是催眠系列的征服感，你现在又在画的啥？
(fanza评论已打1星，用蹩脚的日语评论了我的感受，至于审核啥时候同意发表就不知道了)

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Hentai 101 on how not to write a story. Completely directionless, especially compared to how cohesive the author's first tank was.

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画着画着就变成全员都是过分熟透的巨人族了。一开始几话明明还好的。只能说作者为了自己的XP放飞自我了

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Still draws the best MILFs in history but shieeeeeeeeet

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小日子独有的非得整点什么才舒服，mc题材的长篇，还是第一人称的，我看着不是为了爽，是为了看一群mz给我按地上一顿啪?，顺便一提长篇作品一开始画风体型还算正常，后面越来越放飞自我，最后两集尤其是最后这篇完全就是作者和他其他作品风格差不多了，甚至给我一种他画bd就是为了找画这种风俗店母猪，开个单篇不行吗，之前看还挺期待的，nmd，隔壁没有mc长篇后期出现黑吃黑然后反杀的?非得恶心人一下显得与众不同，tnnd，他要是开篇明牌说自己就玩恶堕母猪mc也行啊最后整这出。艹

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去作者推特看了下，好像这就是最终话了emmm

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全部变公车被别人搞大肚子？下一话记得告诉我是幻想时间 不然和一开始的主题背道而驰，太烂尾了

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I mean sure, MC wasn't exactly an upstanding citizen from the start, but he was still /ourguy/. He was the protagonist for 9 fucking chapters. We were rooting for him to win it all. And you just say "Actually, no he gets reduced into being a brain dead cuck. Everyone else is still fucked, though." At the LAST MINUTE? For who? This just makes the previous 8 chapters worse retrospectively. I don't know why such great artists make some of the shittiest fucking narrative choices. If you were tired of this series, there's no reason you needed to go scorched earth on it.

Fucking whatever. I guess I'll be looking forwards to his next series/piece, provided it's not more of the same.

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顺便说一下，作者蓝鸟上说这就是最终话，这也是我tm直接去fanza打1星的原因。
现在就是后悔，这500日元拿到隔壁dl去看修女拉着男主的手说"不想把你的**交给别人"不香吗
淦

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them: complaining about porn schlock plots
me: titty

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冲倒是挺好冲的.......就是男主没反杀有点失望！还以为男主能反杀搞个怀孕后宫呢，结果全变成母猪公交车了（最喜欢的藤宫妈妈就这样分给路人了）.....全系列是不是就这样完结了？希望单行本能有新内容把.比如加点风俗店客人的视角啊，这样会更好用.还有多来点藤宫妈妈的戏份,藤宫妈妈的怀孕戏份只有1格太可惜了,希望俵緋龍老师能单独给藤宫妈妈出个外传.
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至于作者后期的夸张人体，我倒没什么意见，我还挺喜欢这种夸张的丰满人体风格，就是柰子再大点会更好.
总体来说剧情给个5分,结尾有点难蹦.实用度9.5分,老师画的丰满肉体色气好用,冲了N次.最后给了4星（贤者时间来打个分）

Last edited on 03 September 2023, 11:38.

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Losers upset the 1 button hypnosis loser mc got uno reversed card by a giga milf. Hilarious. If you read this series having any attachment to this mc, you deserve this. A normal predictable ending would be fine too, but this is what the author chose to end with. I’m fine with it. True alpha female won.

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畫風一樣棒 劇情就不吐槽了

有催眠能力還要收集母豬 賺錢ZZ

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x上说了就是最终话 没反杀确实挺可惜的 毕竟题材就是那种无脑艹的爽文模板 结果结局来个大反转主角变废物 只能期望单行本能加个新结局或者后日谈什么的 不过结局画成这样估计也够呛了 俵绯龙老师本身产量就不高 貌似也不怎么玩社交软件 推特每次有新作才会发一下 下次长篇估计有生之年了

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传奇落幕，令人惊叹

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剧情本来就无所谓，男主第二话就把公车拿去私用了，妥妥一人渣，还指望他反杀，早该图图了。现在app制作者拿母猪们去开妓院，虽然挺无语，但涩就完了

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我日 怎么就全变成母猪公车了 男主也没反杀成功 就一种爽文爽的好好的 突然最后一卷一个BOSS把所有主角都杀了一样

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Is it surprising that the MC didn't fight back? He did get hit by the same hypno app he used on the women last chapter, and unless I missed something once affected by the app one can't break free unless the controller let's them go.

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话说最后一页女BOSS抱着的小孩是她自己的吗？前面几页没见到她怀孕，其他女角色还大着肚子

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前面男主不也私车公用么，看个本子闹麻了

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Suki！！！

太色了我直接冲到自己嘴里

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I was hyped for this ending, although it's quite unfortunate that the protag turned into a cum dispenser, i hope tawara will see the backlash and do something.

The story in those 2 last chapters was 4/10, the art was an 8.5/10

Last edited on 15 September 2023, 11:03.

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story ruined my boner lmao

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问题是主动私车公用和被动私车公用区别还是很大的呀

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please fast a english translation

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連載
中文
催眠性活【藤宮ソフィア編】
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催眠性活 [伊集院舞衣編] (COMIC GEE Vol.2)
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催眠性活 [藤宮イリア編] (COMIC GEE Vol.3)
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催眠性活 [藤宮イリア完堕ち編] (COMIC GEE Vol.5)
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催眠性活【園部彩子編】 (COMIC GEE vol.6)
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催眠性活【園部彩子発情編】 (COMIC GEE vol.7)
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ソフィア&舞衣 搾精報告編
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催眠性活【白銀友梨編】(COMIC GEE vol.9)
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催眠性活【白銀友梨欲情編】 (COMIC GEE vol.12)
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催眠性活 【高橋絵里編】
COMIC GEE vol.15
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催眠性活【石川理奈＆神崎舞編】
(COMIC GEE vol.20)
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催眠性活【城ヶ崎裕子編】
(COMIC GEE vol.22)
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催眠性活【牝穴風俗店編】 完
(COMIC GEE vol.25)
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結果主角爽到倒數第二話後被反殺,作者何必自己天降一個BOSS BBA來搞自己的作品呢?好好的收尾不就好了,雖然主角也是人渣,不過基本上這種爽作讀者都是帶入主角的,這樣一搞最後評價狂掉也不意外了

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Bad End :(

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垃圾，恶心

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Art as always is great but god dam did they take the story out back and shoot it, honestly I'm just going to pretend the story ended 2 chapters ago and leave it at that.

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Three fucking years.

Just to end it like this.

10/10 I'm actually fucking pissed. Consider me trolled.

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Hate to break it to you guys but thats usually how hentai with anything resembling a story ends usually lol. Either an antagonist shows up and ends things or the plot gets resolved by some extreme ass pull nonsense. You shouldnt be expecting much from hentai stories lol.

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@ Naliys

i dont know what you've been reading but that is NOT how most hentai end. most go in one direction and end usually where you think it would. at best you'd be thinking of the stories were the MC abuses his power too much and either forgets his situation or slips up causing his downfall (great examples are the invisible guy getting hit jaywalking, timestop guy being unable to start time, hypnosis guy turnikng the girls into hyper sluts and being drained bone-dry)

the sudden turn of the narrative is normally stupid/annoying, hate to break it to YOU but people do care about the vehicle that delivers their smut lest you'd be looking at an image collection and not a dojin

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English version please... My dick is exploding right now.

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meat overload, dick exploding every page

Last edited on 04 September 2023, 05:26.

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