Nobody translated this so i did it.
this is my first try in translating something.

i just started learning japanese so feedbacks are appreciated.

>feedbacks are appreciated.
Ok. tl;dr: do your homework and learn English before translating. Translation isn't something absolute beginners should pick up.

1. You need to work in greyscale for black and white pages and level your images. Your images are really faded.
2. You're missing punctuation everywhere.
3. There's a lot of typos (tip: every day and everyday mean different things. "after all" is always two words. Also, you're clearly not a native, so your phrasing sounds really awkward or is just wrong overall.)
4. Manga Temple's a bad font in general.
5. There's no reason to ever export black and white pages as JPG. PNG-8 is the way to go.
6. You have dust (remnants of cleaned JP text) in like all your bubbles.

rough grammar

p.8 with such lewd sound
p.10 what will happen to a teacher > would
p.10 sensei's responsibility // please do it properly > you can't do "responsibility" properly, this isn't English
p.11 everyday
p.11 afterall
p.11 can you just shut up and enjoy? > missing something. enjoy it? enjoy yourself?
p.14 i was died
p.14 even though you just cum
p.18 it's overtime work again today > I'm working overtime again [today]
p.18 works

etc.

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General: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Leveling/exporting: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/902314557077336064/997654450149789757/optimize_image.jpg

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Choke on a pile bunker wtf is this monstrosity

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I find amusing that Rin has a condom in the cover, but its not even mentioned in the content lol

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