Version 2 as of 09/06/2023
Special thanks to Orasmase for pointing out corrections.

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02: selfish n carefree => selfish 'n' carefree
02: wantto => want to
04: reacted [...] hear
- inconsistent tense => reacted [...] heard
05: i'm go
- present continuous uses participle => i'm going
- alternatively, present simple works here too => i go
07: afterall => after all
10: Do you get it?!
- idiom => Got it?!
11: shes actually happy
- auxiliary => she's actually happy
16: sensei's cock please give all of it only to me
- Japanese syntax => please give all of sensei's cock only to me
18: in the cheek
- wrong preposition => on the cheek
18: [...] i love it
- Japanese syntax => I love [...]
19: if you don't do it [...] then no
- incoherent => i want you to do it [...]
21: is open show me
- distinct clauses => is open, show me / is open. Show me
22: he said cute to me
- incoherent? => he called me cute
23: drooling
- missing subject => I'm drooling
24: alot => a lot
25: to be sensei's hand
- preposition needed here => to be by sensei's hand
26: in my clit
- wrong preposition => on my clit

Also more periods and commas would be welcome.

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tagging based on @orasmase

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@orasmase

Thank you for the revisions. this is applied to the new version now. If there are more corrections, feel free to post here.

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