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Taken from DLSite: https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ01099365.html

Credit for translation belongs to ApricotJam

03: give me to me => give it to me / give me
07: guranteed => guaranteed
07: sorceror => sorcerer

Base +8, beast5200 +7

Nice plot twist.

Base +5, politas +7, as102 +13, Dein Gott -6, catie001 +6, gguy123 +10, Generic_Generica -6, TheKrister2 +6

Story is too fucking kino. The plot twist in the end to further the misery in such a clever way is fantastic

Yurifags being btfo is always welcomed too

>score -100
why are you booing me!? You know I'm right!

Last edited on 17 October 2023, 23:50.

Base +6, Cazman -6, V972 -8, politas -7, Lao Shan Long -7, TheGreatKing +7, sauerkraut -22, darkerdrick -7, Krall-Elite -6, ComicFlan -6, Dein Gott -6, dudeinator -6, mrkmnns74 -2, and 64 more...

And then they had kids, and those kids turned out ludicrously powerful.

Base +6, Miko Neko +7, Quote Marks +10, Krall-Elite +6, Crian +6, Maxer123 +6, felzasj +6, gguy123 +10, Zakuzelo +14, Temperature Critical +27, Darker7 +7, Sky boy +6, Dememori +7, and 11 more...

I’m so happy she got her limbs back in the end. I’m even more happy that she was forced to keep the penis that grew on her.

Base +9, ctaglack +26, Darker7 +7, ag13 +6, hellocakeguy -6, wolf224 +7, TheKrister2 +6, cm4000 +6, Ember2528 +6, AnglamarkMusli +6

Just noticed that the sorc. is a character from one of the other doujins that got isekai'd at the end o_o

Base +6, AhKai +6, jagd84 +6, TheKrister2 +6

my comment getting bombed with negative score feels like a success
get fucked retards, your "girls loving girls" delusion is shit wishful thinking and the plot twist in the end was great to showcase it

Base +6, Ookamimimi -9, Kold -6, Daymz0008 -7, gondantez -7, uminova -6, SomeUne -6, requiemforameme -6, sayumatsu -6, macanudo8 -6, Keylo -7, Snikey -6, catpenis -8, and 43 more...

Futa chick wins in the end. Simple as.

Base +7, hellocakeguy -6, cm4000 +6, Sokengo +7, Hardart +6, voices in my head +6

Lol so one of them is trying to stop herself from raping her friend and the other is worried that her friend thinks she's dirty? Priorities

Base +6, ag13 +6, TheKrister2 +6, the dru one -7

The ending leaves a bit of a bad taste. Generally, you either don't get any backstory on the victims or the victims get what they deserved. Here, getting to know that they were both mentally damaged make you hope for a good ending

Base +7, PenisMen +6, V972 +8, ToriNikuKame +6, ag13 +6, hellocakeguy +6, LostWord -6, KVHF +6, TheKrister2 +6, the dru one +7, 6996man +6

Lol what a bummer ending. Depressing, but also funny.

Base +6, ag13 +6, LostWord -6, TheKrister2 +6

that end just seems pointlessly cruel.

Base +6, voices in my head +6, 6996man +6

Y'know, this story is kind of weak even by hentai standards. The motivation to de-level those two is... because they're good at their jobs? Seriously? Sure, they're annoying... but why even put up wanted posters for monsters if you don't need them killed? And if you DO need them killed, why would you complain that someone is solving your issues?

Makes zero sense tbh. Also makes zero sense why those two were left alive at all. If word of what was done to them got out... and there's no reason why it shouldn't or wouldn't, then the guy who arranged all this would be fucked beyond reason. It'd be only a matter of time until some other powerful adventurer decided that they're not ok with someone willing to do something like that.

I don't mind dark stories played for kink, but this whole thing feels forced even by the many varied mediocre hentai standards out there.

Or maybe I'm weird for having a fetish for consistent world building and loving settings where the smut and the set-up for the smut makes sense internally...

Last edited on 01 April 2024, 16:38.

Base +21, BeanBros38 +6, sable1 +25, daeva255 +6, WhiteFenris +10, KinfThaDerp +6, 6996man +6