Rough draft

I'll double check and edit it up properly later

don't rip off my rough drafts.. (someone actually did that)

thanks for working on this, hope you do the others.

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this is really hot.

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Pg 10 "in front" as opposed to infront

Pg 12 Idk if "husband" would be the term, I feel it odd a woman calling her husband "husband" you used dear in later pages so I'd change it to that to keep it consistent?

Pg 25 same "in front" as opposed to infront

"my own son..."

Pg 26 Missing dialogue

Pg 27 "This is more embarrassing,,,"

Pg33 "...you're satisfied"

Other than that I'd say some punctuation's missing here and there but those are what jumped up to me as the more obvious errors.

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