Hello, this is part 2 of Morino Hon's Home
As always any critiques/questions/tips etc are greatly appreciated, thank you

JP part 5 /g/1306557/1cd28bd3f5/
JP part 4 /g/1281913/7b33360d4d/
JP part 3 /g/1258003/0aa2916a8c/
JP part 2 /g/1258001/e7408e9fad/
JP part 1 /g/1258000/5dda79b8c1/

EN part 5 /g/2968951/713c12e414/
EN part 4 /g/2847477/147e9b266d/
EN part 3 /g/2781727/9d4210b707/
EN part 1 /g/2685789/54ca04d95c/

edit:minor fixes to punctuation, missing sfx, typesetting and typos

I wasn't sure if the ending was about the PC-98 games or some other obscure piece of touhou lore.
Thanks for the clarification and TL notes.

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Small issue, but on page 42 it’d actually be “awakened” or “awoken”, but not awokened.

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Reimu looks pretty good in that outfit

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Note: On p. 12, "severeness", though logical, is not a word. What you want there is "severity".

Reimu seems even more psychotic than usual in this series.

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oh i see, i'll change it to severity in the future, thank you
(i want to overhaul the earlier volumes in terms of quality so I'll bundle all changes at once instead of flooding the site with constant revisions)

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