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Base +19

Rough grammar (please someone with more power throw in the tag too):
pg 1. togehther -> together
how precious her tits -> how precious are her tits
the outfit makes me stunning. I can't resist it. -> That outfit is stunning. I can't resist it.

pg 2. You tempting IRyStocrats -> You are tempting
I couldn't resist any "longer" -> I can't resist. (Also "longer" probably doesn't need to be in quotation marks)

pg 3. Already being horny just from smell of the dick. -> You are already horny just from the smell of a dick

pg 5. Nephilim's temperature is higher than human body -> than the human body's.
her feng tickleling my glans -> her fangs are tickling my glans OR her fengs are tickling my glans (depending if fang was also slangified in the original)

pg 6. I can't hear you what you saying -> I can't hear what you're saying
Her Thighten throat sucking on my dick is so good -> Her throat tightening while sucking my dick feels so good OR her tight throat sucking on my dick

pg 7. It flow out like crazy. Did you enjoyed it, IRySchan? -> It's flowing out like crazy. Did you enjoy it IRyS-chan?
We still have a plenty of time, so let's do it one more time. -> We still have plenty of time, so let's do it once more.

pg 8. Is she freez up? -> Did she freeze up?/Is she frozen up?
We'll gonna treat you from now on -> We are gonna take care of you (probably a translation error as well)

pg 9. her cute clitoris is already erectioned -> erect

pg 10. my fingers insert smoothly -> my finger are going in smoothly
go on, get squirt -> go on, squirt!

pg 11. she's light as feather -> light as a feather

pg. 13. Keep swallowing! Drink that cream down bitch! (into two separate sentences)

Base +8, throwahentai +6, Syerathe +13

Appreciate the effort, but the Rough Grammar tag is only valid on fan-translations, not for official releases.

"Any 3rd party translation"
https://ehwiki.org/wiki/rough_grammar

Base +36, Jokelfire +9, Gintokiii +7, Davyroo +6, oheye +9, Great Me +9, Vormik +7, Aggresivesnakes +13

raigyo's not great at grammar, but keep in mind this is just a preview, the final version might have improved grammar/typesetting...

Base +9, Vormik +7

This is weird, it says it was posted sometime yesterday, but I don't remember seeing anything even though I checked earlier today.
Either way, thank you for finally posting it, I was waiting for it for so long. Hope you post the full version once it comes out too.
The sample looks amazing, but I'm just a bit disappointed that Irys or Bae didn't say a word during the sex scenes, it was just the guys talking. I know it's a sample, but since they didn't talk here, I doubt they'll suddenly start talking in the full version...

Base +6

Uff, my b then. I thought it was translated by the poster not the author themselves.

Base +8, heh...narto +6