While I like the art style, there are minor flaws in attention to detail. Example: Page 10 her foot is on the wrong way.

Edit: still can't see it being right. Her legs are nearly straight out with her knee slightly bent, and the sole of her foot is pointed inwards towards herself (by looking at her big toe you can tell this).

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I'm impressed you were focused on the foot

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@Mirukui
If you look carefully enough.
It is the right way.
That how the angle look like when you draw it.

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