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TheScion11233

D&D porn is always a jam. Looking forward to how this one ends up.

+1 for the potential of goblins

Base +6, demonxlol +6, MyOpinionIsRight +6, MehMeher -8

2d20 damage? Holy fuck.
Must be a rogue.

Base +18, OtleChip +9, MyOpinionIsRight +6, spuget +7

It may be nitpicking but I love how cross wielding goblin make continuous stabs while talking. So many jokes come to mind thanks to that.

Base +8, MyOpinionIsRight +6, spuget +7

The font is terrible. Otherwise it's interesting

Base +6, Davidrinius +6, MehMeher +8

Entroop, the font is Avenir Roman. I’ll be using Comic Sans in my next project

Base +4

It just like in my d&d campains, gurl always wanna romance and roleplay sex while I just wanna kill some goblins ;_;

Base +6, MyOpinionIsRight +6, Davidrinius +6, Spring Heeled +16, spuget +7, pureyang +23

@0ld0neEye : Been a long while since I played, but I can't recall any weapon that does that kind of damage (maybe the spell he added to it allows that? ^_^)

Base +6

> I’ll be using Comic Sans in my next project
ₚₗₑₐₛₑ don't. Here is some honest feedback.

You need better typesetting. The text is life- and emotionless. You left-align your text as well - this is a comic, not a school report. Here are some more "well-known" comic authors that have good typesetting, which is well within your artistic capabilities. A lot depends on the selection of font, but punctuation and dingbats help massively to improve the style of your comics. Although taste is very subjective, there is good and bad typesetting , so I want to point you to some authors that do this, in my opinion, very well. Here are some very well-established authors with very good typesetting:
/g/2706933/5773c93d72/ (Totempole)
/s/90be8cce51/1988947-28 (Mr. E)
/g/2461685/c01597ffc9/ (Melkor)
/g/2077709/d17045e2d5/ (InCase)
/g/2283292/c10c04dd14/ (Dross)
Some of these use a font and keep themselves to simple dingbats and annotations. Mr. E for example, uses written text for annotations in his comics. This is not necessary, but it gives a good idea how much good text can improve your comic. Dross sparingly uses dingbats to convey emotion, but they generally keep themselves to simple speechbubbles, except for occasions where text might overflow in a bubble. InCase uses a lot of extended vowels and "misspellings" to push more meaning into a word. When strong emotion is conveyed, text spills out of the bubble. Notice how text might be more aligned with movement. Totempole is creative with color, they use different colors for different characters and play a lot with italic and bold fonts.

Here are some smaller artists, closer to your works of art:
/s/c38ff42f62/1942118-8 (Kitsune23star)
/s/f0fbfdf2c2/1753280-10 (HeyItsKung)
/g/1629901/f333be1c49/ (Oh!Nice) (God speed you magnificent son of a bitch)
/g/2548408/cec4b0805f/ (Shellmaid)
/g/853839/e91bb38f61/ (Markydaysaid) (One of his earliest comics, when they still were a smaller artist. Example of the old guard of western smut.)
Kitsune23star uses very simple bubbles and adds drawn text here and there to give some scenes some more power. Heyitskung is a good example of adding more shapes to your bubbles works well to convey emotion. Note the text from the game they are playing - which incorporates well into the background. Oh!Nice uses simple rectangular text boxes which work well with the different colors. Note that due to the middle-aligned text, some text boxes have a lot of empty space. Shellmaid is a good hybrid between dingbat-filled manga text and a western-style comic. Notice different alignments (rotation, top-bottom) and many dingbats in exclamations. Finally, take this early work of Markydaysaid and compare it to his current work - you will see that upon moving from a silly-looking comic sans to a more manga-like font, they get more freedom to move text around and insert diacritics, punctuation and dingbats all throughout their works.

You already use some of the techniques outlined above (colored speech bubbles, emphasis by capitalization, great use of written text on the outside of characters) but especially the font and alignment need work. As of now, your speech bubbles look to "artificial" and rigid.
If these artists do nothing for you, try to look up some of your favorite artists and see how they incorporate text in their works. Good lettering is not easy, but can make all the difference between acceptable to read to fun to read. Keep it up and all the best!

Base +7, Oblast +6

Thank you Anon1029338 for the feedback. I’m going to mess around with different fonts and speech bubble styles in my next project to see what works best for me. I’m always trying to improve. The point of these comics are to tell my real life stories about my polyamorous relationship. Of course I’ll be doing other stories too about other things in my life but I wanna get these ones done first.

Base +5, MehMeher -8, Oblast +6

Understandable - all power to you, keep it up!

Base +7, MehMeher -8

I enjoyed it, good variation of postitions and goblinas are always a great choice.

Base +6