七瀬くんとナース服 by 節操マイナス (節操なし子)
Nana's Nurse Costume by Sesso Minus (Sesso Nashiko)

originally posted:
https://forum.ashemaletube.com/forum-topic/comics-29638/page-2/#postNum22

03: we haven't pick => we haven't picked
06: am i suppose => am i supposed
07: surpise => surprise
12: let's me => let me
25: The costume, i went and got them [...] get them together
- inconsistent number => The costume, i went and got it [...] get it together / The costumes, i went and got them [...] get them together.

Also:
- upper case inconsistencies
- lack of punctuation
- many dialogues can be complete sentences

ಠ_ಠ

Last edited on 15 November 2023, 18:15.

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That last image...

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Garbage tier translations, dickpics that nobody wants, and creepy private forum shilling. Great.

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Thanks for proof reading

Last edited on 15 November 2023, 06:00.

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It's always the weirdos proud about their shitty translations pulling the freak shit like this...

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Stop complaining about getting translations. Can any of you read Japanese?

Also, no harm “shilly a private forum”, just don’t go there if you’re scared.

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I'm fine with the translation, forum link or whatever but really, that dickpic was bad.

It's an ugly picture and perhaps more importantly, it doesn't fit the manga ! At no point do we see their dicks orientated this particular way and there's an untamed bush obscuring the dick itself when the characters are shaved !

Also, the bit of cloth (which I assume to be a dress) is probably satin, which doesn't even fit the story. The character dresses up as a nurse, when have you last seen a nurse in red satin ? It can't even be the other guy because he's dressed as a patient and no hospital would allow bed bound patients to be dressed into something like this.

Anyway, please don't put a dickpic at the end anymore but if you must, at least try to make it fit with the story.

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