As promised, now everything is should be truethful to the original work. This is a localized translation.

Hey y'all! I allowed myself to rewrite some bits, so the translation is not word for word. The original series can be found here: https://www.pixiv.net/user/42941565/series/175312 . Translated by Trolestia.

Last edited on 15 November 2023, 23:41.

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But why rewrite? (And what is rewritten anyways?)

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I didn't know that rewrites were such a controversial topic. I tried to translate everything as accurately as I could, the only page that I rewrote a bit is 64. I will update the gallery soon to undo any tampering in translation that I may have done.

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This was so well written despite appearing """low quality""" overall. Very glad I read it, it was super relatable

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ryan gosling cameo at page 32 O_O

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@trolestia

Even if your rewrite ends up being better the majority of people here would prefer an accurate translation posted before any rewrites

Also there's a history of terrible rewrites posted here with no indication that they were rewrites, this discouraged actual translations from being done

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@trolestia
Rather than using the term rewrite, try localize. While both are similar in nature, they have different meaning. Rewrite often mean (at least here) that you discard the original story and put in your own. While localizing often mean that you change some of he phrases (or even some detail in the story) to fit the culture of the target language without changing the storyline.

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Yeah the only rewriting people want is like, if you straight translate a line and it sounds weird in english, it just needs to be localized to sound like a normal english line. If thats the kind of rewriting you are talking about, then fine

But if you're like, changing plot details or changing character relationships or adding hot takes or dumb jokes or anything like that, people don't want that.

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I redacted the translation to exclude anything that might have been untruthful to the original work. As Bior said, the translation is localized to sound like a normal english. No no such actions as "changing plot details", "changing character relationships", "adding hot takes or dumb jokes" were taken. This translation is as truthful as it can be, of course taking into consideration my tools and abilities.

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他是怎么从那样变成这样的？

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